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BowtiesandFedoras


Hey! You! Motherbucker! Stop doin all that crack!

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On the moon there is a message addressed to the mighty Princess Celestia. This message is engraved in the eternal dust of this barren desert of nothing, and within this eternal dust, are listed the past sins of the powerful Princess, written by none other than Nightmare Moon herself.

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Comments ( 9 )

Very interesting, I give this story a thumbs up :)

It was very interesting. A personal diary and a new insight on what may have happened. Personally I don't like the idea of changing the innocent story line so much, but i won't go and say that this never should have been written. It was a great story to piece together and I look forward to future content. :moustache:

This. is. Awesome! :raritystarry: :rainbowkiss: :pinkiehappy: :ajsmug: :twilightsmile: :yay:

I know it's VERY petty, but I honestly would have liked it better if there had been a space between paragraphs. Other than that, you made it completely perfectly.:heart:

Deserves a feature.
Deserves it so flipping much.
:flutterrage:

This is very good!
My only problem was the lack of pony terms.
I.e. Monster of a man - should be colt or pony
Woman should be Mare or pony.... Etc.
Other than that i really did enjoy the story! :)

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