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Wind Sneaker


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Clue Chaser has failed his royal guard exam for the eighth time, but just when he is down on his luck, he is selected to be a part of a film documentary dedicated to all those in the princess's service. Not wanting to pass up this opportunity, Clue agrees to part of the film, only to discover that a master thief known as the Kamaitachi is using the documentary as a means to infiltrate the palace.

The camera's rolling and time is of the essence. Can Clue track down the evidence he needs to stop one of the biggest heists in history?
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preread by SamuriKura

This is my first time ever writing a fanfic, so your thoughts and critiques are highly recommended so I can improve for future chapters and possibly stories if this is liked enough.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 2 )

I feel like we're getting My Cousin Vinny'd here. I mean, how could he ascertain all of that information simply by looking at a picture?! I would love to hear this!

Ahem...
Sorry...

Anyway, while there are a few grammatical issues, the start of this story has me intrigued. Then again, I'm a sucker for crime stories anyway. Have a star.

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Thanks for the comment, and Clue's ability will be explained more in later chapters.

I'm a sucker for crime stories as well. There's just something about trying to solve a crime along with the characters that feels so exciting

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