Oh boy, a secondary plot!

It´s just me, or the protagonist doesn´t seem particularly bright? The least he should do considering his situation, is trying to absorb as much information regarding Equestria as he can, including socio-politics.

Sometimes I simply want to endorse a story once more and wish that pushing the "thumb up' button will work twice (because we have two hands ). I just don't understand why I'm so attached to your story... Well... no offense but by the first glance Its nothing special among other good stories but for now it is the one of three stories that I'm waiting to be prolonged (and let me say that is is most waited (or expected or wanted - excuse me my English) of them). And finding every next chapter fills me with joy. This is all the more so weird because I'm really not a fan of HiE (or human soul-in-pony) stories.
Excellent work!

Eh... I don't know if I like the whole 'play along and try to be like Trixie' when the sole intention was going to Twilight to, oh... tell her the truth. Least, that's the impression I got. Especially since now, it's painfully obvious it will come out at some point, and it will be overblown into a massive shitstorm cause of it.

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Dat plot! ..Oh wait, you didn't mean that kind of plot

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Well, 'you' basically want to get home. You just had no idea that you couldn't just explain the whole situation. But, yeah... you kind of are

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None taken. I don't really consider my story anything good truth be told, it's average at best, and i know that. I do try to make it as interesting as possibly though, and as long as people enjoy it, then it's all good.

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That's a valid opinion. 'you're' basically caught in a situation that you don't want to be in, at all. On the one hand (hoof), you just want to explain this whole thing, get it over with, and go back to your human self. On the other side, fear out of possible jail time or worse (added due to the fact, that you know the goverment back on Earth, would capture a talking pony and wouldn't exactly treat it nicely) and thus you fear the same thing would happen in Equestria. Then you learn of this whole conspiracy against Celestia and that makes this whole thing even more difficult, thus you're forced to stay quiet, learn magic and undo this thing yourself

(But as you mentioned, it won't be that easy )

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I would just think that "I" would take the smarter route and lay it out for Twilight. It's pretty fucking obvious if things came down to it that you're "Mostly Harmless" to borrow from an author I love. "I" possess no threat to them, afterall.

But, you are the writer here. Just not a fan of the bury your head in the sand approach.

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Like when Twilight finds the album, for example?

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I suppose my problem is, my type of HiE protagonist is one who makes use of human´s witts and resourcefulness to get out of problems. Considering how dangerous is "his" actual situation (impersonating a pony in a paranoid society post-failed-coup d'État) any dude with two brained-cells would try to learn and blend as much as possible.

great as always

THINGS THAT COULD GO WRONG:
1. Trixie was part of the rebellion and the others find out.
2. Twilight finds the pictures of her in Trixie's wagon thingy.
3. Trixie's dildo slips out of her hat and hits Twilight in the face somehow.
The first one has me concerned. The other two will be amazing.

This fic continues to reinforce its fortifications on my attention, due to the quality being very significantly higher in comparison to many other stories I've seen on this site.

Trixie doesn't seem to be the kind to think that far ahead, it's a little unnerving that she seems to have placed some sort of censorship spell on herself...

Ok now i have to force myself to stop this fanfic I really hope he can stay in her body, i already don´t like it in movies if they have to say farewell. I mean there is an anime where are two worlds and the whole movie plays in the fantasy world, but at the and he have to say farewell and after that it seems like it had never happen, and for me it looked like it meaned nothing what he learned there. ......yeah i need to go to bed, good night

Yup, has to be on of those... er... what do you call the "thou can't tell anyone what's wrong with you" spells? It has to be one of those... still wondering how things are going for real Trixie...

5908630 Like a Geas! Or however it's spelled.

Oh god, don't tell me Trix was a part of the rebellion....
If that was found out........

Nuclear Shitstorm activated

Jerry! You're actually doing ok for once.

Discord would figure you out though, because you're shit at keeping it natural.

Then Trixie gave Twilight the dildo.
The End

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Jk.
Enjoy the simple parts if yer story.

Wait, what? A civil war in Canterlot? Is that why they don’t trust you? What kind of idiot would try to start a war in the capital where two princesses live that control the sun and moon respectively anyways?

I've actually thought of the same thing. There is likely a group of people who believe that the princesses shouldn't be able to control the sun and moon, as that could be used as political leverage.

This is a very interesting twist. It really drives home a deep sense of realism and the consequences of these events.