When Trixie visits you in a dream and tells you that she wants to change places for half a year, you accept thinking its all a silly dream. Little did you know just what you agreed to.
LE GASP! This is right after the changeling invasion, meaning Trixie isn't on any good terms with Twilight, meaning our lazy fucktard of a waste of humanity hero is screwed! Ok, now I'm starting to actually get into this. I must know what happens!
Btw, the writing is reaching into the realm of being really good, despite the occasional odd sentence and typo, such as multiple (2) instances of putting "life", instead of "live".
Good chapter. Should be interesting to see how she pleads her case to Twilight.
I didn't see any plot...
LE GASP! This is right after the changeling invasion, meaning Trixie isn't on any good terms with Twilight, meaning our
lazy fucktard of a waste of humanityhero is screwed! Ok, now I'm starting to actually get into this. I must know what happens!Btw, the writing is reaching into the realm of being really good, despite the occasional odd sentence and typo, such as multiple (2) instances of putting "life", instead of "live".
I love the description you put in this story. plenty of detail I can picture it clearly good job.
I'm willing to bet that the Elements are no longer. We'll see.
Also, totally digging the fact that this story seems to deal with the whole "how do ponies pee?" Issue. We'll see.
I loved it can't wait to see what happens next
I've been playing too much Skyrim cause when the guards spoke I pictured them sounding like a Hold guard... but good story, all errors aside!
It's a shame this story got cancelled.
This chapter’s adorable.
Ah like it. :)