The lack of accents didn't bother me much (I kinda don't care much for the spa sisters accents). anyways great chapter aside from a few gramatical errors, this was just great

Yesss Another chapter!!!!

I laughed, I smiled. I picked out hints.
I had a good time here.

Also

some plot against you?

.
Get double meanings.
*Goes back into the spa.

Time for a Happy ending*

It lives.

I'm half expecting AJ to lock 'Trixie' and herelf in the caravan and demand answers.

Mc is getting more like Trixie as time goes by we think. I wonder if he'll want to return when the time comes?
Keep going! ;)

This is a great story! Continue to update, man, this is gettin good!

Nice chapter.

4448545 I agree, this chapter was not the best, i can´t really say what it was for me what maked it less perfect, but i am statisfied with this chapter.
The sexual things maybe were named a bit to often, but i like it that the story named those things without actually do these things all the time. (i hope that maked sense (German) )

I really like the story, i think this story maybe really only is as long as the week is going to last, but i would like a sequel i think. In the story it is day two isn´t it?

Damn, sexy twins is a fetish on its own for you.

Hmm... I couldn't help but recall that scene from that one Austin Powers movie... 'Fuuk you' and 'Fuuck me', anyone remember?

And, my reaction in the event of discovering my mane was turned green:
Rarity: *idly hums to herself as she works on an upcoming project*
Me: *kicks down her door and marches in with a Spartan Laser* Hasta la vista, baby.

Spadate from Tartarus indeed.

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Fuuk Yu and Fuuk Mi were great.
Love Austin Powers.