Short Bio... Short Bio... Hmm, perhaps I could mention, no... Ah perhaps... no no, that's not good either. Ah! Yes! I just know what exactly to say for this short bio! Oh wait, I just ran out of room.
(My first story ever, so bear with me.)
Dinky and her mother, Derpy, must help a lost stallion found in the dark reaches of the Everfree forest to unravel the mysteries behind his past. With no particular leads of his home, they must take a journey to discover who he is, and why he is so different from everypony else.
Cover Art is Everfree Forest Background by Cubonator from Deviantart
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>She turned her head towards her unconscious savior. I must... for his sake.
This section is awkwardly written. It doesn't sound like something a filly would say. Then again, her voice is pretty consistently written like that, which makes it somewhat better.
Still, I'd try to focus less on making the language sound impressive and more on story-telling. Still, more please.
2796116 Thank's for pointing that out. Your right,
it doesn't sound like they would actually say that, I'll go ahead and fix it soon.
Why on earth must every story I read with changelings in it always have to portray us changelings as being evil?