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The moment I saw chapter 34 I got goosebumps. Can't wait to read it!
Another enjoyable chapter.
But I thought Petite Cure was Mrs. Cake's daughter, not her sister?
Also, small complaint, I feel like there should be more dirty talk. Especially when James is balls deep trying to breed a mare.
A voice in Deadpool's head? Now that's a funny description
Nice play with the name; it's better than anything I could've come up with.
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She's the daughter; what Joy Handles is saying is that Cup Cake's mother was the one that left Petite Cure to her care.
Tatt was a awesome /awesome read I loved it and can't wait to see what happens next.I hope James fucks Petite Cure and friends along with Joy Handles or just Petite Cure and Joy Handles.
Panties as souvenirs? Nah, he's gonna bring the CMC: French Edition trio back with him
Question, how far along are the pregnant mares? me thinks they'd be due very soon
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they are pregant for about 12 months
so thinking the heart and hooves day = valentines day
and cosling on now are nightmare night = october and halloween
you will get some mesure of time :)
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thanks for that, glad you liked it
Will see what happens in the next chapter :)
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thanks, had the funy image of me was the trying to be the blue one, the box/voice of reasion
you the orange/yellow on, the crazy one :)
But still, they are both crazy on their own way.
Thanks for another chapter!
The only question I have is are you having James develop a split personality or something?
Previous chapters did not have it, or anything leading up to it...
It just kind of came out of left field.
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to clarify
Mrs Cake was pregnant before getting together with carrot
After she gave birth to that filly, her mother (the mare owning the Ma home) brought the newborn filly to Joy Handles and asked if she could take care of it.
Joy Handles being Mrs Cake close friend agreed and adopted her. And So Petite Cure became her daugther.
Hmm will see if I can turn up the dirty talk, I know I have been keeping it light in that regard, but hey, have not much experince with the dirty talk. haha I hardly even swear.
So will see what I can do :)
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No nothing like that. The few latest chapter some similar comments have been seen, but I have not highlightet them
like I said, those are author and proof reader comments, think of them like shoulder angels that is watching over James and commenting on his adventure, but they can't be heard or seen by James.
Also had some help with Julian the dreamer in editing some of the previous chapters, those will be uploaded soon also, fixing some errors and such to make the chapters look nicer, also adding some pictures to some of them
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Thanks for the clarification. That sentence was worded a little confusingly.
As for dirty talk, it doesn't have to have swearing or degrading language. It just has to be something that would arouse the listener.
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Hehe, will try to do that then. But also in that regard, a newbie. But will try my best at it :)
I hope you introduce another human his hypocrisy is a little off putting to borderline annoying and having another human capable of being compared to might make him more humble then having him think he's celestias gift to females. Keeping his mares inline by using sex is like keeping a crack addict inline by giving them a hit. I hope if he ever walks in on one of his mares getting it on he doesn't pull a bitch move and complain about the unfairness of it all when he himself has buck and impregnated at least 6 married mares allready. Don't get me wrong most of them were the ones who initiated the tryst... but still.
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We shall see if another human will join the frey or he being alone
Will see where this will lead :)
Have something of a plan :)
Actually, Lapine is french for doe rabbit, not doe deer. Although really, the way they go at it in this AU, not much of a difference, is it? XP
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Haha, well used Google translate and wiki to look for this...
So I know some could be wrong or different meaning than intended
This chapter, it was very frustrating for me, and not in a sexual way.
No, I was frustrated because of how these mares are treating him, and how it seems he doesn't have the confidence to stand up for him self; or fight back in a way that would say "LET ME BE!!!".
I feel, that you need to add another human to the mix, one that will teach him to "man up, and resist the temptations." And to give him a way to dispel, at lest half of the curse Celestia Put on him, so that he may be at lest somewhat normal again. And to point out to the ponies, the number of sexual "wrongs!" they'v done to him, and to point out the number of humans that would be very mad at what they'v done to James, that would commit "physical harm" in vengeance for him.
So what I'm saying, is that the ponies need to get there shit together, because there's only a small number of humans that would want some of what's been done to him; most would see it as abuse of power and sexual assault.
Now I'm sorry if I upset anyone, but I felt that this needed to be said. Now I am going to keep reading this, cause I'v seen stories that went thru a phase like this before, then completely change in favor of the character.
So yeah, you know I'll be watching, just try and make things better for James. O'k? ok...
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Hmm can understand you somewhat
But what is to say that James like to have sex anytime he pleases, even if it is a blow to his "man card". He is living in a female dominant society
So he maybe can't act all macho and stuff.
Think in reverse of how women have been treated in ages past. Been seen and not heard kind of thing.
And this is not much a action revolution story with him acting all macho and take over the throne to teach all the ponies how to treat a human male.
He just have to blend into the society. he maybe can stand up for himself and not treated as a doormat, but what to say will be the punishment for doing that. He is only one human after all.
I could just drop another human female or male. But want to focus on James and make him the only human in this fic. If I wanted to involve more humans, I would have gone with another version of the Gentleman universe :)
He will act on some things and as you say "man up" and act dominant some times. But in this he will pretty much follow his dick :)
Thx for your input anyway.
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Alright, just make sure he mans up and controls himself batter sooner rather then later, and I still think some of the spells on him need to be dispelled.
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Haha if you mean the spells with him having a big slong, well those will be permanent :)
He maybe will get another dose in the future, maybe by one of the princesses or maybe Chrysalis makes a comeback and add some more inches to his dick or balls, or making him more virile
If you mean with him thinking with his dick most of the time. Will that I'm afraid will also stick with for awhile, would not be much of a clop fic without that would it :).
And how he can get into some comical and dramatic situations ;)
And like I said, think he will be casious becouse living in a female dominant society. Who knows what Princess Celestia will do if he start to "man up".
It can result with him getting a slutty sub Celestia that he can just use and fuck when he wants.
Or
He will get locked deep in a dark dungeon and used as a breeding stud for the rest of his days by eager mares :)
So he will have his low and high moments. With him starting to interact with the colt cuddlers and other feminine stallions and colts (aka femcolts/tranny) He will start acting more dominant, but still sexcrazy.
So will see if that will bleed to the mares at a later date :)
Have many ideas and have gotten some suggestions how the story will go, so have a plan but the way there will be curvy and have some detours :)
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I'm both thrilled and upset now, and I don't know how I could be both.
It's unnatural I tell you, UNNATURAL!!raritycry:
Whhhyyyy.......
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Meh magic in that word :)
And also sex crazy ponies :)
But most to the part of readers suggestions and also my big imagination :)
Well hope you will continue reading and enjoy it :)
I'm trying to squeeze in some fetishes into this clop story that are common and such.
But not to the more extreme ones...
So will be high and lower and trying to tickle everyponies fancy
So also besides some M/M action, also some more F/F, threesome, moresome and even orgy
Have a whole list of suggestions and wishes and also that's why it will go on 50+ chapters
have even started to add some addons to my original story line with ponies that readers what to see getting bucked by James and either be part of his herd, just getting pregnant or something else
Hey, do you have an update for me?
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More hung or virile than he already is? Unless it's temporary as when Chrysalis kidnapped him, I don't think it would be a good move.
His current capabilities are already ridiculous.
By the way, how's the chapter coming along?
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slowly coming along
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Need some help?
It’s almost that time
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have plans yes for some if not all of them :)
Question: What would happen if you drop another human in there as well, a woman perhaps.
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not on the table at the moment, maybe down the line
If so will still debate on if it will be a woman or male or maybe both
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Would you follow them or would you still tell the story that happens around James?
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Hmmm will see
Maybe doing side chapters that will follow them around but the main focus will be James if that happens
Almost time for new chapter to come out
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Sorry for the delay.
But I'm studing for an exam and will be taking it the 1 Nov
So that is one of the reasions the chapter have been delayed...
After 1 Nov I can pick up the slack and focus more on the story :)
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I've already edited the chapter. The entire fic, actually. He just have to update it.
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will get on it during the weekand with looking over and updating some stuff that Julian have helped me re-edit and such..
And working more on chapter 35
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There's your answer; I think he replied to the wrong comment.
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Oops :)
Yeah answered the wrong comment :)
So how do you think you did on your exam .... weren't partying to late Halloween were you. Taking a exam tired sucks.
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Yeah... it went well :)
I'm been working on some things with drawing and writing my own and helping some others for the rest of the week
Then I discovered somemthing today on Sunday when I went out to buy some anime dvd:s ...
I discovered my credit card got hacked...
How? I don't know yet...
All the money on it gone... Just like that
So have been hectic in phoning around and such.. Blocking the card and all that...
Not fun...
Will talk to the bank tomorrow on monday...
Trying to clean up this mess...
Put a damper on my day...
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Shit that blows ... haven't gone to any Wal-Mart's lately have you. I hear there's a fake cover they snap on card readers that works regularly but stores data. If any of them are chip types there's also mobile scanners that read the chips from a few feet away.. Or could be the old fashioned diner waitress taking your numbers while paying a dinner bill. Either way whoever did it's a piece of s**t and deserves to be hit by a bus and dragged for a few miles while their skin slowly gets peeled off. Fn thieves can't even shoot em dead in your own home now a days without someone screaming excessive and suing you for protecting what's yours. As you can probably tell it's a sore subject. Whelp one test down 20 more to go with the added bonus of 15 years of debt. lol. Good luck.
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No it seems some hackers reading the traffic
I about a week or two ago bought some dvd from Amazon
Don't know how or when but seems to be connected to that
Will try to clear things out with them and also my bank...
So someone then either used my account or throught it took a large sum of my money from my credit card and nearlt empited it dry
So will see what have been bought or so from that, why they double charge me...
Will keep in touch as I will clear this up this week...
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Damn ... at least the how was figured out. Half the time you figure they'd just shrug say well get this cleared in a few months then ruin your credit history with dereliction of payment when it's not payed due to it being under investigation. Just make sure those credit card companies know it's under investigation for fraudulent use by personally calling letting them know and get a confirmation number. Some companies will hound you for payments because their fn departments don't communicate with one another.
Hey just thought of something we've seen sweetie get a time with him .. dinner fun ch.15 .... and bloom had her few moments in between in the loft chapter 2 but scootaloo always sorta been a off to the side in the background maybe 3-4 line involvement . What's the chances James and her are gonna get a more active chapter maybe even getting caught in the act by rainbow leading to who knows what shenanigans
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Yeah are on it and it is blocked so that further payments and such are blocked...
Will be a pain with the paperwork and also see what the hacked bought or so from my account
Don't see any history on the matter yet, but will see what will come up
And see if I can cancel the delivery before getting shipped or so to Who knows where....