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I'll have to read this when I get up later.... Woo Hoo!!!!
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So have looked it over and changed it for the better I hope :).
I'm constantly improving and I also want to do it with the story to make it a fun readable clop one
I actually want to see how far along Zecora is. How far along is Babs?
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In due time :)
Think will be a chapter or two before with Babs
Zecora...
Well will take a couple of chapters...
She will be seen and all that, maybe some clop also, but at the moment I wan't to focus on others ;)
In short, there is no doubt in this mare's mind that her child will crave incestuous sex with its sire.
I don't buy's Cadence's explanation for one minute. With what she's thought and said to James, I sense no affection directed at Shining.
With how much sex he's having, I'm really surprised the guy isn't numb to it by now.
Imma need flutters to get some
That was awesome I hope he show Flutershy and Rarity some fuck time love in a threeway next chapter.
Awww, still no maid or guardsmare fun? also poor spike, loses rarity to James and then had to clean his mess.
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Haha no worry have planned some small ones :)
But that will have to wait until chapter 30/31
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Hmm maybe...
But think will keep the mane six and their interactions with James seperate for the moment, but further down the line I will add some bigger fun times with James and some mares/fillies
Meaning
Fluttershy + 1 or +2 way
Babs + ??
Sister+sister
The mother and daughters of the Belle family ) Sweetie Belle, Rarity, Pearl
Apple family
and the like :)
7686296 I think her version of "love" is a convenient mare to look after her foal while she ruts some other stallion, I would have some sympathy for shining armor if it wasn't for the fact he gave up his chance by going to the ma house instead of strait to cadence when she needed him and he obviously has no qualms with getting on peach bottom. I don't think the concept of love as we know it will ever play a part in this story, it's just the way this universe is, like I said shining had a chance with cadence, but he blew it. Hopefully atleast some of the mares will come to love James for who he is and not just for his jousting meat. (I wouldn't be surprised if babs had a few colts/stallions while she was away to see her mother, wouldnt put it past any of them).
7687329 woohoo!
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Right Love is a little shallow in this universe.
They can care for each other and all that, but they still have their basic insticts rooted in them. Meaning the urge to breed and reproduce. And also if a more sutible male comes along. The females are more likely to go after him, to make healthy strong offspring and all that.
Also the females crave some secual satisfaction. All the males are quick shot small dick ones. The mares are 98% of the time sexual frustrated and somewhat horny most of the time. The estrus just makes that feeling 10x times more intense.
So Cadence for example care and have affection for Shining as a person. She like/loves him but him as breeding material he is useless.
Marriage is more of a material contract in a way. Who gets what in case of death or divorse.
Shining has the right to herd, so he can "test" out a potential herd member or so. Cadance is Lead Mare so she has a saying who can join.
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Also staying faitful is pretty doomed as mares takes every chance they get to get some action.
Other than that the sex toy industry is booming thats to those frustrated mares.
The funny thing is that they are many different dildos and female stimulus but hardly any items for the stallions.
(why bother, when a eager willing cunt is just around the corner)
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With babs (and some other mares)
Well she may or maybe not stay "faithful". But see it this way. Why trying to seduce a small quick shot stallion or colt when she had her big coltfriend waiting at home.
Can image that most females/mares James had rutted will stay somewhat more faithful to him becouse if what hecan give :)
I will upload a side story that will be a info one about the world he have dropped into :)
Let him find out what the title that Zecora called him means.
I hope fluttershy will fuck jame soon. also I wonder if you plan on jame go with twilight to eqg world and jame gonna meet sunset shimmer and fuck her?
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All in due time :)
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Hmm Haven't thought about that... But think I wil have him for the moment still in feral pony land
Maybe she will do that on her own off chapter and Sunset Shimmer just enter the scene later
The latest chapter here gave you hints where in the time line he is :)
7688441 I want to read his reaction, please let me laugh.
Twilight is the only one with the voice of logic and reason here...... until she gets a taste of James's dick
I only have two things to say, both of which I'm sure you've heard.
1. Your writing has improved.
2. James idea of seduction was hilarious. Just whipping out his dick... I chocked on my drink when I read that.
Overall good job but I do admit to having a dislike about this story, namely the cheating aspect, but whatever I just sorta skip past those parts in this story. Hoping to see more of this story soon.
Cheers
- Toaster
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Can't please all, but trying to add some fetishes exect the most extreme ones :)
Happy at least that my writing have improved somewhat :)
Also like adding some form off comedy into the story, not just clop :)
Sorry to say but cheating is commonplace in this world :(
But will see if James and Babs will break that trend :)
He also have some other mares to please in his small herd
You also can guess who maybe can be next to join it :)
When will Twilight get some action from James?
oh! I understand
Just curious, regarding what Cadence said, would you be up for putting some coltcuddler stuff in? I wouldn't mind some trap action.
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You are not the only one that have wondered that.
Have gotten some private mails about that
Not against it
Will see when and how I can fit it in
But will not be much about at the moment, maybe after a couple or so chapters if so
I know this sound stupid but r u going to make a chapter where each mare give birth to his foal?
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I have planed for making it for some
7735527 ok then
So got another private PM of some ponies that maybe could make a apperiance or James bucking silly
Those where Bon Bon and LIghtning Dust.
You know who you are :)
Also some have requested some femcolt action
Will look over that and think I can make that happen.
So here are some of the mares that you wish to have added (in private PM or here in the comments)
BlueBloods mother
Bon Bon
Lyra (threesome with james and bon bon)
Lightning Dust
More Fleur de Lis
Cherry Jubilee
The Spa Sisters
Twilight
Pinkie Pie
Femcolt suggestions;
Rumble
Button Mash
Breburn
Hmm tell me if I missed somepony
But will see if I can add as many as I can that he can meet and buck, but will tell you all to be patient if so.
I have planned to add as many as I can to the story (maybe a few OC too)
7741660 what about starlight glimmer, night glider or luna?
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Like I said if I forgot anypony let me know
So will add those to the list also :)
7748920 and is celestia pregnant or was she a one time show in the story
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You will see :)
7749442 ok
I hope him to be treated like a public cum toilet by somepony else again. This time he stood as exposes his penis from the gloryhole and it was handled by female several ponies. :9
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He will have his up and downs :)
Sometimes he will act and take the lead
But in others he will be seduced or act on instincts and be used :)
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heheh James seems to have come to Equestrian world for endless sex. ;)
well, I would like to request these ponies.
Coco_pommel
Blossomforth
Three flowers ponies
Mrs. Shy
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Noted :)
I'd like to see femcolt's Shining Armour and Mr Cake, preferably with their partners in threesomes, if you're still taking reader feedback into consideration on that end. I didn't see nurse Redheart but I think you might have something planned for her already so I cast a vote for Applejack, though I think you mentioned she would be doing something else.
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Applejack is still on the table
Hmm fem shining,will add that to the choices :)
Hmm will see with Mr Cake, haven't thought much about using him.
Truthfully I'd love to see some derpy action but with a twist. Usually you see the mare getting it on to get there fillies in but what if it's the reverse this time were dinky gets with him to motivate him to let derpy into the herd after a little incentive one on one time. Hell you can even through sparkler in there for added incentive.
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Hmm have some plans for derpy and dinky :)
You will see what that is :)
7763028 can you at least give us a hint of who will be the focus of the story next chapter? Besides anon of course.
Are you finally gion to have Zecora appear and take her place? If not could you hint who it is? Species at least
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Haha somepony is eager :)
Is will have to some part do with Cadance but some other "ponies" will make their apperianace.
You can still take a guess who the main one will be :)
I hope I can get the chapter uploaded later this week ;)
7770651 blushes ......yea....hehe.....I guess I am eager
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I'm happy to read that :)
Allways fun to read about how readers like what I write :)
7770692 I'm just so interested in how he's going to dig himself out of that hole he's digging. I've had this one though for the longest of time. I
Just imagine the following, he keeps doing what he does and spreads his genes all over, he thinks that nothing much will come from it, most ponies will think the kids are from their respective fathers.
Then suddenly the first baby is born and it turns out its an anthro ...... Suddenly he sees just how screwed he is cause it will be plainly obvious who the father is.
I know that most likely this won't happen but the idea of how you plan to make him deal with something similar (like some random mare asking for her rights for being his mare) puts a smirk in my face and makes me antsy to see what's to come ^^
If that's a lighter punishment, what the f is a severe one? Spoiled Rich was the one that deserved to be punished, not James. Unless the punishment was for him screwing Spoiled and/or Diamond in the first place? And we know Spoiled isn't going to receive any type of punishment.
Well, it looks like Hurricane Burlap has struck again. I wonder what Babs reaction will be if she ever finds out exactly how many mares James has actually bedded? And finding out that Diamond Tiara is now officially a part of her herd?
Cadence's line left me wondering; will the foal be affected in any way due to that?