ok two thoughts keeps coming to mind one does he have a tail and 2 a saiyan water bender will kind of be redundant on there most power full night for reason look at my first thought
2871382 I'll admit, its not the greatest story but, I like the idea you have here and that is ok in my book. I also don't like to be a dick if I don't have to be. I also know how hard it is to write a story in the first place. Just because a story isn't written right, doesn't mean you can't enjoy it. You shouldn't judge a book by its cover, isn't that what mlp:fim is trying to teach us, did we not learn for Derpy? Please, just give it a try people, for Fluttershy or maybe Applebloom? Who knows, you may just like what you see.
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ok two thoughts keeps coming to mind one does he have a tail and 2 a saiyan water bender will kind of be redundant on there most power full night for reason look at my first thought
loving the story by the way
its ok
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No he doesn't have a tail, otherwise Cadence would have asked the first time they bathed together. Good question too.
2860284 but he could grow one at any time, but he would most likely cut it off wouldn't he
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23 people died from the awesomeness that is this story.
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Your comment just made my day.
2871382 I'll admit, its not the greatest story but, I like the idea you have here and that is ok in my book. I also don't like to be a dick if I don't have to be. I also know how hard it is to write a story in the first place. Just because a story isn't written right, doesn't mean you can't enjoy it. You shouldn't judge a book by its cover, isn't that what mlp:fim is trying to teach us, did we not learn for Derpy? Please, just give it a try people, for Fluttershy or maybe Applebloom? Who knows, you may just like what you see.
I'm the Unitedbrony and I give this story a 7/10.
Chapter 8 was kind of "hot" lol