580543 thank you very much i was super nervous when i wrote the clop section seeing as i have never done that style ow writing before and seeing as you like the story can i count on you for the sequel?
There better be an awesome puppy in the sequel or something...
But seriously, good job dude.
Would have made me laugh if you ended the whole scene with; "And then he pulled out, and jizzed on her tits." It doesn't have the same romantic feelings!
despite me not liking death or grimdark stories, I'm glad that i kept reading to see this story through till the end and even though some parts seemed off a bit, this story definitely get a 5/5 from me
581052 Jee Willy Gai! It always makes me have butterflies when I check notifications for my stories! And then when I see them it's usually like. "what?"
Two things: ONE-favorite part for some reason or another in this chapter “Now don’t get Vietnam vet on me.” Dano placed the pistol back on the table. “What is that supposed to mean?” Berry’s expression didn’t change. “The whole ‘I hate to world because they hated me’ thing.” (though i don't how Berry would have learned about Vietnam.. i like the line)
TWO- great work, i really enjoyed reading this. I Personally cannot wait to read more of your work and sequel/epilogue thing. Great Story with great developments and other things. Though a few things did bug me/rustle my jimmies, You've done a great job here. Keep it up
581659 Well, Equestrian history vs Human History. Just saying.
some of the military things, but you seemed to portray it very well at the end. And i guess now that i seen the ending, some of the Fluttershy things bothered near me in the middle, but you tied a nice bow.
*Clap, Clap, Clop* This story has impressed me... I started reading this last chapter at around 03:00 AM and I am happy I did so, the series has been very interesting and fun to read, I can't wait for the sequel. Anyways, if I had a cookie I would give it to you. I don't think I like cookies...
Woa-ho-ho! DAT SCENE. i3.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/original/000/191/809/me_gusta_mucho_by_megustamuchoplz-d416uqk.png
Great chapter, with lots of emotion. Bravo, you've written a brilliant story.
Oh, and the sex scene was great too.
580543 thank you very much
i was super nervous when i wrote the clop section
seeing as i have never done that style ow writing before
and seeing as you like the story
can i count on you for the sequel?
580573
Hell Yes
What he said. We're both eagerly awaiting the next story.
When we're not revising for exams and/or writing our own story
I told ya dude! Great success!
There better be an awesome puppy in the sequel or something...
But seriously, good job dude.
Would have made me laugh if you ended the whole scene with; "And then he pulled out, and jizzed on her tits." It doesn't have the same romantic feelings!
Also, Fluttershy after Dano was finished:
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580605HEY!!
Leave pony shy ALONE!!!!
dano can have the human shy
pony shy is MINE!!
thats all i feel right now
edit: Wait what ablut Berry
Sexsexsexsexsexsexsexsexsexsexsexsexsexsexsexsexsexsexsexsexsexsexsexsexsexsexsexsexsexsexsexsexsxsex!!!!!!
Giggity.
despite me not liking death or grimdark stories, I'm glad that i kept reading to see this story through till the end
and even though some parts seemed off a bit, this story definitely get a 5/5 from me
580589 great!
i will get right on that
*camera dramatically fades to black*
580605 that fluttershy looks disgruntled
like she didn't get serviced as well
580812 Ho-ho-hold up man
take a chill pill
you have your cannon fluttershy
leave us the non-cannon ones
580851
wait and see about berry
580887 yes
they had sex
i get it
580927 giggity giggity
giggity go
alright everybody
see you tomorrow
581026 thank you for the comment
i enjoyed writing it just as much as you enjoyed reading it
thank you all for commenting
makes me feel all fuzzy inside
581052 Jee Willy Gai! It always makes me have butterflies when I check notifications for my stories! And then when I see them it's usually like. "what?"
581547 lol
well
i will take that as a compliment
581565 i will take that as a compliment
I didn't compliment you, bird brain.
581569 im confuzzled
581572 That's my job :3
581575 ...
im gonna get writing
Same Old Fight isn't going to finish itself
Two things:
ONE-favorite part for some reason or another in this chapter
“Now don’t get Vietnam vet on me.”
Dano placed the pistol back on the table.
“What is that supposed to mean?”
Berry’s expression didn’t change.
“The whole ‘I hate to world because they hated me’ thing.”
(though i don't how Berry would have learned about Vietnam.. i like the line)
TWO- great work, i really enjoyed reading this. I Personally cannot wait to read more of your work and sequel/epilogue thing. Great Story with great developments and other things. Though a few things did bug me/rustle my jimmies, You've done a great job here. Keep it up
581651 how could she have not heard of Vietnam?
these guys arent country bumpkins
they have an education
lol
local school and such
and what rustled your jimmies?
so i don't do it again
581659
Well, Equestrian history vs Human History. Just saying.
some of the military things, but you seemed to portray it very well at the end. And i guess now that i seen the ending, some of the Fluttershy things bothered near me in the middle, but you tied a nice bow.
581794 hmmm
alright
nothing is perfect
but im happy with it
and thats all that matters
I love this fic. I wasn't much of a post-apocalypse kind of guy, but I'm convinced. Keep on writing!
wooo! sequel!
582541 thanks
i will see you in the sequel
582655 im just as exited
BWA HAHAHAHAHAHA! Oh that last line gave me so much amusement it's not even funny... Echo knows how to treat the ladies.
584714 thanks man
just wait and see the wibbly wobbly timey wimmy stuff that im gonna have to explain
its gonna get serious!
*Clap, Clap, Clop* This story has impressed me... I started reading this last chapter at around 03:00 AM and I am happy I did so, the series has been very interesting and fun to read, I can't wait for the sequel.
Anyways, if I had a cookie I would give it to you. I don't think I like cookies...
-nadroJ
586011 don't tease!
i love cookies
You should of had dano sing I just had sex by the lonely island and great chapter by the way
588620 lol
i think that would have killed the moment
and thanks for the comment