i like how much ive read so far one nitpicky thing though, due to me being from montana an acre is a square feet measurement. an acre can be 1 foot wide, it can be 1,000 feet wide.... not to be mean its just a nitpicky thing love the work!!!!!!:) EDIT#1 Color bone? lolz i laughed edit#2 I love you you just officially made my night but Y U CLIFFHANG? and can you please get flutttershy and dano closer? they feel kinda distant in this chapter.
I really like how you introduced the Doctor and if you could, you should try and hint the TARDIS. There is just one problem... The Applejack/Rarity situation. I can't imagine Applejack being a lesbian (Rainbow Dash easily though) but it's seems like an odd shipping. ...and before I go, I just have to say that was well worth waiting for.
314344 i will hint at the things the doctor is, and i did hint at the tardis his house is dark blue the police box is dark blue ... and Rarijack is a type of shipping and i like it opposites attract friend
314351 oh, I see what you did there... I guess I can understand your logic with the shipping, but I just expected Rarity to have a relation with a male. Not to sound a but pervish, but have you thought of shipping the Doctor and Derpy?
hmm, this seems to be an interesting chapter. Mac breaks his collar bone, we meet "The Doctor", and dano almost gets killed by wild animals again but i gotta say that im looking forward to seeing how far echo gets with jenna, if you know what i mean
i really like this story, it's coming along very well, here's a moustache for all your hard work
@veteran sergeant Invictus lol 1 color bone was in the scene with the doctor 2 MORE FLUTTERSHYXDANO 3:I suddenly realized that all chairs within a 5 foot radius of me have been vacciated... too much
315137 THEN DO SO, GOD DAMNIT!!! i love this story mr ex-sergeant moonbeam I could KISS YOU!! but I wont, not mah thang ya´know anyways I feel like making a drawing of my signature gun but im too lazy to do it THE QUAD BARREL PLASMA SHOTGUN SHALL LIVE FOREVER, MY CHILDREN!!! BTW that wasnt heresy so shut up before I forget to do it RANDOM PICTURE TIME!!! troll.me/images/thumbs-up-jesus-says/the-power-of-buddy-christ-compels-you.jpg
Ok have fun:) If your editors not up and you finish tonight I would be happy to edit it for you. Other than that if you need a break from writing i'll be on untill 2200 MST.
317308 lol editing is my least favorite part right in front of writing non action parts when i say least favorite part i mean i still love it i just like doing other things more ... and my editing is super long i read the whole chapter once in my head than twice out loud once in microsoft word the next when i transfer it to this site
wow... thats impressive im still surprised you missed color bone i laughed sooooooo hard i wouldnt have the paitence cue wall of text cue grammar trolls cue no indents cue no views a for your hard work
317336 thank you and im totally commited to making this fic as perfect as possible and to tell you the truth i wanted to go to bed last night so i only read the fic out loud once, then again quietly when i transfered it to FimFiction and thats why color bone got through
I just gotta say, back when you first started this story I liked it but didn't really expect much, but now I anxiously await each chapter with giddy anticipation. You sir are a fantastic author , you definitely has da magicks
329239 wow just wow comments like this just make me feel so awesome i thank you with all that my words are worth for such an awesome comment you dont know how much comments like this make me want to write more
i like how much ive read so far
one nitpicky thing though, due to me being from montana
an acre is a square feet measurement. an acre can be 1 foot wide, it can be 1,000 feet wide....
not to be mean its just a nitpicky thing
love the work!!!!!!:)
EDIT#1
Color bone? lolz i laughed
edit#2
I love you
you just officially made my night
but Y U CLIFFHANG?
and can you please get flutttershy and dano closer? they feel kinda distant in this chapter.
314073 lol
where i come from an acre is an acre
edit 1: where did i make that mistake?
edit 2: dano be working hard, and they will get close soon
like next chapter
SPOLIER!
Yes... this pleases me! More please!
~Parajack
314210 on the way friend
dont you worry your little nogin
Great Story, though I am confused on how he is so really good with the Knife, or maybe I missed that part. Great read though, keep it up!
314263 he really isn't that good
if you read through
he is just hacking and stabbing
not a lot of flourish
2nd :(
I really like how you introduced the Doctor and if you could, you should try and hint the TARDIS.
There is just one problem... The Applejack/Rarity situation. I can't imagine Applejack being a lesbian (Rainbow Dash easily though) but it's seems like an odd shipping.
...and before I go, I just have to say that was well worth waiting for.
314297 dont cry....
*hug*
314344 i will hint at the things the doctor is, and i did hint at the tardis
his house is dark blue
the police box is dark blue
...
and Rarijack is a type of shipping
and i like it
opposites attract friend
314351 oh, I see what you did there...
I guess I can understand your logic with the shipping, but I just expected Rarity to have a relation with a male. Not to sound a but pervish, but have you thought of shipping the Doctor and Derpy?
hmm, this seems to be an interesting chapter. Mac breaks his collar bone, we meet "The Doctor", and dano almost gets killed by wild animals again
but i gotta say that im looking forward to seeing how far echo gets with jenna, if you know what i mean
i really like this story, it's coming along very well, here's a moustache for all your hard work
314388 yes derpy get with doctor
but Dano has no hand in it
so it will suddenly appear out of nowhere
314872 GAH
that moustache has so much win
makes me wana skip class and write chapters....
@veteran sergeant Invictus
lol
1 color bone was in the scene with the doctor
2 MORE FLUTTERSHYXDANO
3:I suddenly realized that all chairs within a 5 foot radius of me have been vacciated... too much
315137 THEN DO SO, GOD DAMNIT!!!
i love this story mr ex-sergeant moonbeam
I could KISS YOU!!
but I wont, not mah thang ya´know
anyways
I feel like making a drawing of my signature gun
but im too lazy to do it
THE QUAD BARREL PLASMA SHOTGUN SHALL LIVE FOREVER, MY CHILDREN!!!
BTW that wasnt heresy so shut up
before I forget to do it
RANDOM PICTURE TIME!!!
troll.me/images/thumbs-up-jesus-says/the-power-of-buddy-christ-compels-you.jpg
Sorry I'm late!
Dano kicks ass. Like a boss! Admitedly, he got wounded, but no pain, no gain! Loved the fight scene! Thanks for the hard work bro!
315822 thanks for the help friend, and prepare for awkward DanoxFluttershy ness
316066 yo, whats up christ?
nm man, just dieing for your sins
sweet, you're the best jesus!
316218 lol
the fight scenes are my best, and admitidly the easiest to write
i only had to edit it like once
it just flows from my chaotic mind
hahahahahaha awkward? is that a cute fluttershy-silence-is-golden-awkward kinda thing?
317248 kinda
you will have to wait
update tomorrow?????????
also just saw your post... sorry if im keeping u up...
i dont want to impose
317282 not a problem
and maybe and update tomorrow
i tried to go to bed
but im just not feeling it
gonna try and write as much as i can right now
Ok have fun:)
If your editors not up and you finish tonight I would be happy to edit it for you.
Other than that if you need a break from writing i'll be on untill 2200 MST.
317298 lol
i am my own editor
ig you didn't know that
nope...
i did not
in that case... SCREW EDITING I WANNA CHAPTER... if thats ok with you
317308 lol
editing is my least favorite part
right in front of writing non action parts
when i say least favorite part
i mean i still love it
i just like doing other things more
...
and my editing is super long
i read the whole chapter once in my head
than twice out loud
once in microsoft word
the next when i transfer it to this site
wow... thats impressive
im still surprised you missed color bone i laughed sooooooo hard
i wouldnt have the paitence
cue wall of text
cue grammar trolls
cue no indents
cue no views
a for your hard work
317336 thank you
and im totally commited to making this fic as perfect as possible
and to tell you the truth
i wanted to go to bed last night
so i only read the fic out loud once, then again quietly when i transfered it to FimFiction
and thats why color bone got through
i dont care about the color bone thing i was just happy i got to read it:)
on an unrelated note... i hope big mac and dano are ok
317361 your picture failed
cant see it buddy
iDeleteed it.... it wasnt anything big just a rainbow colored dog bone chew toy thingy
317377 lol
well
cool?
idk what to say
would you rather watch your parents have s*x for 365 days or join in once to make it stop?
317399 no
lol... u mad bro?
or will youcontinue to ponder that question for the rest of your life?
317407 no
stop messing with my head, and stay out of my shed
ok
hmmmmmmmmm i think she said were always welcome in her shed
317424 "why have things been so weird around here lately?"
"my daddy makes me put glass in my vagina."
"yeah okay, well good luck with that."
OH MY GOD!!!!!!
LOOK AT ALL THIS PORN!!!!!!
sclich clich swag
317447 "ohh, miss Rarity my little fingers hurt from making so many dresses against my will."
"Oh my poor baby. Let mama Rarity look, i'll fix you up." *magically breaks fingers* "No need to thank me dear, generosity is my middle name."
"Oh no. Looks like hard times ahead for Pacooooooooooooo"
i know!!!!\
HEY RAINBOW DASH WANNA COME AND HELP ME FIND THE ELEMENTS???
HEH HEH HEH HOW BOUT YOU SUCK MY TIT YOU CRAZY C*NT HEH HEH
SVVAG!!
I KNOW ILL ASK RARITY!
317473 prepare yourself for the best line of that series...
"FUCK YOU I CAN EAT ALL OF THESE APPLES!!"
true story bro.......
and did u notice fimfiction slowed down a shitton at about 2013?
or is it just me @Veteran Sergeant Invictus
317502 yeah
they said their host was having trouble in a facebook update
they cant do anything about it
oh... ok thanks friend
i didnt know they had a facebook...
my daddy makes my stick glass in my vagina
317524 you loose
i already used that one!!
crap! i will go shed manly tears
this is gonna be so totally fuckin rad
317529 lol
well
im gonna disappear
see you all next update!!
*poof*
bai:)
cant wait man i wanna see this update:)
stay strong and pon3 on:)
I just gotta say, back when you first started this story I liked it but didn't really expect much, but now I anxiously await each chapter with giddy anticipation. You sir are a fantastic author , you definitely has da magicks
329239 wow
just wow
comments like this just make me feel so awesome
i thank you with all that my words are worth for such an awesome comment
you dont know how much comments like this make me want to write more
YAHEE!!!: