So, we've got one guy, not exactly well-trained in the art of combat, all by himself, with enough supplies to last through a second apocalypse, out in the middle of a forest that seems to be remote enough, but we know there are people out there willing to kill to make a living.... what could possibly go wrong? Once again, fantastic chapter, I especially liked the way you describe the little details of the places he visits. Can't wait to find out what happens as part of his 'training'.
241884 thank you for the comment, and im a tad sorry for keeping you up ... nah NO SLEEP FOR YOU!
241918 thanks for the comment and to tell you the truth im enrolled in SUNY Delhi the college Dano attended so i know the area pretty well i did have to modify it just a tad
heh, just like fallout, hoarding everything until you can't carry any more and despite having school, you seem to update rather fast can't wait to see what his training is
242827 lol but Dano cheats he has a vehicle and thanks for the comment i kinda just pumped the chapter out and didn't realize it was one in the morning heh silly me
244933 For sure. I will admit I'm reeeeeeeeeally glad you didn't go all cliche and have her find and patch him up after the dog bite. I kept expecting it and was relieved when he handled it himself.
244945 no, that would be weird i never planned that the meeting will actually be nice not a lot of violence when they meet up but a lot of shyness but thats normal
How Dano should react to his situation: Oh my god... Where is everyone? What happened to society? ...I... I killed two people yesterday. I shot them dead, then looted their bodies and stole their truck without even flinching. What is wrong with me? How Dano reacts: Well, guess I better start looting stuff. OH! GUNS! OH! A TRUCK! Oh well, had to kill them. Gasp! Weapon accessories! hehehehe Everyone being dead is awesome!
HOW BIG IS THAT FREAKING TRUCK? I mean really it's like it never ends he has tons of stuff but he just sticks it in the truck and it's like it's not there anymore until you want it...... Like in Zelda Navi: well you see the way you access your infinite truck is by pressin- Me: SHUT UP NAVI
I was right about to get ready for bed until I saw you updated the story, And I also have to say your doing a great job at writing this story.
So, we've got one guy, not exactly well-trained in the art of combat, all by himself, with enough supplies to last through a second apocalypse, out in the middle of a forest that seems to be remote enough, but we know there are people out there willing to kill to make a living.... what could possibly go wrong? Once again, fantastic chapter, I especially liked the way you describe the little details of the places he visits. Can't wait to find out what happens as part of his 'training'.
241884 thank you for the comment, and im a tad sorry for keeping you up ...
nah
NO SLEEP FOR YOU!
241918 thanks for the comment
and to tell you the truth
im enrolled in SUNY Delhi
the college Dano attended
so i know the area pretty well
i did have to modify it just a tad
This is way better than what I thought it was going to be. More updates would be awesome
242254 ask and ye shall receive friend
and thanks for the positive comment
Meet fluttershy already
242570 cool down friend
she's gonna show up soon
maybe next chapter
or the one after that
idk yet
heh, just like fallout, hoarding everything until you can't carry any more
and despite having school, you seem to update rather fast
can't wait to see what his training is
242827 lol
but Dano cheats
he has a vehicle
and thanks for the comment
i kinda just pumped the chapter out
and didn't realize it was one in the morning heh
silly me
Loving the story so far, will love it even more when it's not just him wandering and such >.> YUNOFLUTTERSHYYET
244866 he isn't really wandering
those women are guiding him
lol
i bet you can guess who they are
and fluttershy will appear when she does
244897 Of course of course, not saying your doing anything wrong. I r just impatient
244928 lol
ik
but the wait will just make the appearance even more great
244933 For sure. I will admit I'm reeeeeeeeeally glad you didn't go all cliche and have her find and patch him up after the dog bite. I kept expecting it and was relieved when he handled it himself.
244945 no, that would be weird
i never planned that
the meeting will actually be nice
not a lot of violence when they meet up
but a lot of shyness
but thats normal
What are the dimensions of these crates?
How Dano should react to his situation: Oh my god... Where is everyone? What happened to society? ...I... I killed two people yesterday. I shot them dead, then looted their bodies and stole their truck without even flinching. What is wrong with me?
How Dano reacts: Well, guess I better start looting stuff. OH! GUNS! OH! A TRUCK! Oh well, had to kill them. Gasp! Weapon accessories! hehehehe Everyone being dead is awesome!
HOW BIG IS THAT FREAKING TRUCK? I mean really it's like it never ends he has tons of stuff but he just sticks it in the truck and it's like it's not there anymore until you want it...... Like in Zelda
Navi: well you see the way you access your infinite truck is by pressin-
Me: SHUT UP NAVI
The gas in that big tank would have gone bad a loooooong time ago. Other than that, I saw no real issues with this chapter.