Yes! That was a great chapter. Not a single important person died, I'm so... Happy?! I'm just a bit curious though, I thought the Doctor would have been a pacifist. Still a great chapter though, now if you don't mind me I'll be getting some much needed sleep. -Richard
Fantastic, loving this...and i feel like Echo is going to die in the coming chapters, because that's how stories where the main character has a 'pet' goes...
464699 Well, he nearly killed all of the Time Lords and the Daleks, caused the eruption at Pompei and countless other deaths... So yeah, he's a pacifist! -Richard
478537 I have suddenly realized that I seem to have failed to link that image properly (I am proud to admit that I am absolutely terrible at using computers sometimes)... Anyway, speaking of chapter 18, it was great to see some justice dished out for the attack on Ponyville. It was also a relief to see that the ambush went off more or less without a hitch, despite your numerous hints in the comment section that somebody important would die soon- even if that means it's just going to happen later on. As I've said before, you made it very easy for me to put my mind's eye in Dano's position- having never been in combat, personally, there's no way I could truly know what it's like, but you've certainly helped. It really seems like all of this tension and action is coming to a climax- which is a mixed blessing, actually. On the one hand, it'll mean I get to read more "Whole New World", which is always a good thing- but on the other hand, it means that the story's most likely coming to a close soon. It will be a sad day indeed when this story is over- but until then, I get to see more of your work- I just hope I make it there without slipping on what's left behind from when you authored all over...
518113 Well whatever I'm glad you brought SOMETHING into existence, was about to unfav this since it was so boring. The whole universe is interesting, still confusing, yet interesting; let's see where this goes, shall we?
Yes!
That was a great chapter.
Not a single important person died, I'm so... Happy?!
I'm just a bit curious though, I thought the Doctor would have been a pacifist.
Still a great chapter though, now if you don't mind me I'll be getting some much needed sleep.
-Richard
Prepair your anus author,molestia is here.
Sid? hmm, sounds familiar like the first three letters of DIScord backwards
and yay, no one important died.............yet
and a moustache for a good quality story
This pleases Dr.Shisno
need more blood
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“Dano. You shouldn’t have killed him. We are supposed to be fighting these men, not becoming like them.”
Twilight’s words struck a nerve in the survivor.
“Last time I checked I wasn’t killing teenage girls.”
Owned. Be sparing with mercy.
Pussy only shot him in the leg
463867 a pacifist?
how many times has he nearly committed genocide again?
463919 you don't have to tell me twice
464039 nice catch friend
and i shall store that moustache in my handy, dandy moustache box
464068 blood for the blood god
skulls for the skull throne
464352 you know it pal
464641 i want to see you get shot in the leg and not cry about it
love it Gaius!!!!!
I LOVE THIS TORY SO NOW, ONCE AGAIN,
BLESS!
YOUR!
FACE!!!
464751 thank you sir
465194 ...
every time you bless my face it glows
i am weird enough without having a glowing face
465196okay, if you dont like that then
BLESS!
YOUR!
PE***S!!!
AND YOUR EYES!!
465201 im not even going to look....
No I mean that carrot only shot him in the leg and not the head>>464699
465776 ah
yeah
silly carrot
Fantastic, loving this...and i feel like Echo is going to die in the coming chapters, because that's how stories where the main character has a 'pet' goes...
466251 keep your shirt on sparky
and wait and see
dang it your killing me when they headed to the back of the truck i thought it would be there
466315 the suit?
NO!
i said the suit will be in the sequel
and at the end of said sequel
464699 Well, he nearly killed all of the Time Lords and the Daleks, caused the eruption at Pompei and countless other deaths... So yeah, he's a pacifist!
-Richard
ok sorry but i cant wait to see how it will be used
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
SUCH A TRIUMP!!!
GAIUS IS CREDIT TO TEAM!!!!!!!!!!!
466463 unless he needs to be
and i think the destruction of ponyville would bring out his darker side
466474 epicly
467127 lulz
yep
477959 you should read chapter 18
then give me another comment like this
cuz i just authored all over the place
and it is super gross
478537 I have suddenly realized that I seem to have failed to link that image properly (I am proud to admit that I am absolutely terrible at using computers sometimes)... Anyway, speaking of chapter 18, it was great to see some justice dished out for the attack on Ponyville. It was also a relief to see that the ambush went off more or less without a hitch, despite your numerous hints in the comment section that somebody important would die soon- even if that means it's just going to happen later on. As I've said before, you made it very easy for me to put my mind's eye in Dano's position- having never been in combat, personally, there's no way I could truly know what it's like, but you've certainly helped. It really seems like all of this tension and action is coming to a climax- which is a mixed blessing, actually. On the one hand, it'll mean I get to read more "Whole New World", which is always a good thing- but on the other hand, it means that the story's most likely coming to a close soon. It will be a sad day indeed when this story is over- but until then, I get to see more of your work- I just hope I make it there without slipping on what's left behind from when you authored all over...
479456 speaking of that picture, here is what i used as a base for their dresses
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your pic just seems to be a more in depth drawing of my base
and yes, we are coming to the climax of one plot, but the romantic plot will be a little bit longer
if i had to guess i would say, including the one i am working on, three more chapters
that isn't a promise or guarantee
but just an estimation
also, Dano's story isn't over
he will have a sequel and several appearances in other fics that take place in his universe from other perspectives
not many, but some
edit: i like your picture better tho
i think it has to do with the girls being a bit more bustier
lulz
518098 lol
i thought echo from The ballad of Echo the diamond dog
518113
Well whatever I'm glad you brought SOMETHING into existence, was about to unfav this since it was so boring. The whole universe is interesting, still confusing, yet interesting; let's see where this goes, shall we?
518136 well
you make me feel wonderful with your "about to unfav since it was so boring"
518166
Aww... denver.mylittlefacewhen.com/media/f/img/mlfw941_Rainbow_Dash_deal_with_it.gif
518344 just because of that gif
i shall
as you say
cope with the circumstances
518707
...
520164
MOAR!
544382 this is coming from the guy who said they were about to bail
maybe i can hold off on this next chapter...