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2759322 Nah. I give it 3.

2759322 10 seconds flat xDxDxD /))))

2759322 You do realize it's under the length minimum?

Anyways, yes, keep going. We need more good Derpy clop.

This is one hell of a concept, and you've just done it right. Make sure to not go too fast, and this'll be a good fic indeed.

Keep it up!

Since we can all see where this is going, I think I'll take the pleasure of getting this up first.

huh, well this is interesting. can't wait to see how this turns out. OH! please tell me she eventually winds up accidentally seducing one of the princesses! that'd be funnier than hell! maybe even have twilight walk in on them and join in.

...my mind is full of wat.

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Never has music and MLP been so perfect for each other. Still waiting for more ninja musical numbers of Sir Mix A Lot to jump up and terrorize the other fics. (You'd think it would happen a lot more often in those HiE fics when they bring their mp3 players along with them)

Get all the mares shaking that plot like a polaroid!

i3.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/original/000/113/728/dat-ass-3.jpg

narwhaler.com/original/ia/7/dat-ass-spiderman-iA7MNG.jpg

that is all

So yeah.
That happened.

I just read a clopfic and I JIZZED IN MY PANTS

I can see this going places.

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I'm gonna try to take my time with it. the original outline is pretty short (only 4 chapters), but I guess I could always make it longer if you guys want "moar"

who didn't love a good derpy clopfic i.qkme.me/3pjstx.jpg

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I hope this didn't actually get featured. I passed out as soon as I posted it

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The omake at the end of this chapter had me rolling on the floor. Scroll down for booty shaking!

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It's not in the box yet, you must be using supernatural powers.

2760656 I mean, make sure your pacing isn't too fast. You can keep it four chapters, but be sure to move at a steady pace.

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Oh well, pfft, then yeah, I'll be fine.

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Mmmyess, good.

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Yeah, just finished and I was like, "four chapters? This could be sooooooooo many more than that, regardless of WHEN it takes place exactly "

Anyway, this was an interesting story that I'm glad I chose to read NOW, rather than putting it off until later like so many I do these days, since I stopped reading as much a while back for a time now, unintentionally. Derpy being rather innocent about what she did and what actually later happened was a bit of a surprise, for being a fully-grown mare here, but it worked pretty well, I'd have to say! Not sure what the title of the chapter means in relation to the plot of this chapter, but not nitpicking exactly, just saying. The sex scene was possibly a bit short in comparison to some of your other stories I've read, but I know it was probably intended to be that way, and I'm sure we'll get more and longer ones in the coming chapters. I liked it, though, especially as I imagine this is probably more for the "plot" than for the clop. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Derpy_Hooves_lolface.png

I'm curious to see what sort of "//dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Octavia_plot.png " (possible pun intended ) this story will have with Derpy and how long she can continue to be ignorant about it, but I'm sure it's going to be fun! I REALLY liked this story, of the few I've read or continued to read in the last several months and hope to see more soon!

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I'm not sure if a mere four chapters will suffice to contain my enthusiasm for the clop-concept of "the incorruptible innocent having sexy times without quite catching on to what is really happening"

Please good sir, do feel free to lengthen your story as much as you can. I'd love to see just how ludicrously silly the situations Derpy finds herself in can progress to.

What about the doctor???

2760656 Well I can speak for alot of us that we want MOAR! Derpy's naiveness is legendary.

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It actually isn't eligible for the feature box just yet.
There's a minimum length now. Any story less than 4,000 words will not be featured.
I think that once a story passes the 4k mark it gets a shot at the feature box though, even if it was originally posted a while ago. Though on that part I'm not 100% sure.

2763689 Oh sweet, I didn't know that. I'll just make sure every chapter is super short from now on to prevent that.

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The Doctor will make an appearance, rest assured.

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Wow, glad you guys actually like the concept!
Still, I don't want the story to feel like it's stretched out. I have standards sometimes

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Yeah I honestly can't remember the meaning of the title from when I wrote the outline a week ago. Maybe I was tired or something, no idea, but I'll change it soon. The rest make more sense.

Also, glad to hear you really enjoyed the story! I have confidence in this one, surprisingly.

Fuck, man, do you do requests? That was amazing.

You forgot the Random tag.

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Well it's a series of events that make sense in a given narrative, so I don't think I can apply it.

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Random: A random-tagged story will contain major elements in storytelling that reflect a lack of logic in how they came to be.

Even if the story is logically constructed, if it relies on an illogical occurrence it should have a Random tag. At least that's how I interpret it.

I think having the world's most hypnotic haunch and no other character having noticed it before qualifies. But whatever, your story your call.

Unrelated; I really hate present tense.

2760656 We guys want "moar."

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You make a very good point.
Added the tag.

I don't really prefer any tenses over another, I prefer to go with what works based on the story itself and how I want to tell it.

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I have since made a new chapter outline so the tally is up to 5. Not sure if it'll be good, but I like the idea

How in the name of all that is fucking holy did I miss THIS?

Faved. Tracked. MORE.

~Skeeter The Lurker

Sequel? ^^

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Eh? It's not done yet

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No idea, I thought you had already seen it and passed it over

Silly ideas sometimes come out to be great...id love to see moar

Read it, didn't enjoy it. I read up to the sex, then stopped. I plan on letting ponies be innocent.

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A bizarrely clever gem like this one? I do not think so my good man.

AND it's original. Or, I have yet to see one like it.

~Skeeter The Lurker

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Will these characters make an appearance?:
Discord
Gilda
Zecora
Iron Will
a changeling scout
Spike

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No to all of those.

I think you've got yourself a winner here

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I mainly vie for originality and variety, so... very much appreciate the following and favoriting

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And when will we see the next chapter?

~Skeeter The Lurker

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Funny you should mention that, I'm trying to finish it today

Post-note: it wasn't in the outline, so you guys are officially getting "moar"

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Just give in. Accept me as the omnipresent being I am.

There really is no other way.

~Skeeter The Lurker

will follow because derpy