Due to a botched spell, Molestia is born. Eager to curb Molly's salatious ways, Celestia sends her to Ponyville to learn the magic of friendship from her most faithful student.
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I almost think it would have been better if the guard had fainted after screaming about the panties. Lol.
rarity:
me: oh my.... she really wants him....rarity...RARITY!
...carry on then...
Rarity and Nightwing have saved this story.
2721455 Saved...it?
2721455 I agree
2721497 I think he, like myself, aren't entirely thrilled with the MollyxDusk shipping, but we are both impressed at the NightwingxRariry romance.
I'm just waiting to see if you can pull off both of these pairings.
You really really rushed the whole Dusk x Molly relationship.
Only four more ponies to pair. And two alicorns.
Ship it like FedEx!! Also, I get the feeling that 'Little Miss Rarity' might make an appearance in this story. Oh yeah, good chapter by the way!
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I have to agree... I'm not sure how to go about it better, but it does feel quite... rushed. "It took quite a while"? It took what... a week maybe? It was barely even hinted at that she liked him like that. Even the Nightwing/Rarity part felt a bit off, but I can't quite put my finger on why.
2721497 I like the pairing. I read it for Molly x Dusk and I would be very put off if it wasn't. I'm not a fan of Cheerilee, so I'm pretty happy with the way it's going.
2722044>>2722011 Ah ok I see, that comment was rather vague so it confused me a little. You must understand that I don't hate Cheerilee, but it was my intention to ship Molly x Dusk. I suppose I could have fleshed their relationship out a bit more, however that would require restructuring quite a bit of material. I am, by admission, an impatient type of person. I have problems with drawing things out...its a tendency to want to get to the point. Also, I have no idea how I would go about rewriting their relationship... I promise I'll try and make Molly x Dusk work with all the usual naughty antics.
I laugh.
Poor Sweetie Bell she most be rather confused by what happening at the door.
2721497 I think Dusk should have finished his date with Cheerilee and spoken to Molly later, maybe even the next day. < shrug >
The Rarity and Nightwing pairing could be interesting, gonna see where it goes.
And why doesn't have the last line? She should have shouted "What's going on!? Why are you both so crazy?" Or you could have mentioned her leaving. I like this so far. Tell me, when does Molly go through town feeling up everypony she comes across?
Well there goes my theory about bat ponies reacting like fruit bats as far as the wingboner question goes. Fruit bats sing and birds get wingboners and I bet he would have rocked a good power ballad.
"glorious"
"you're"
Aaah, there we go!
Pony logic: More clothes = More sexy