Due to a botched spell, Molestia is born. Eager to curb Molly's salatious ways, Celestia sends her to Ponyville to learn the magic of friendship from her most faithful student.
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Such a cliché ending for this chapter, even if a good one nonetheless
I have hoped that returning molly normal would have required a little more....more, but the story focus is somewhere else anyway
A story like this can't be all comedy all the time. Sometimes you need some seriousness to balance it out.
3434766 I didn't really want to turn this into a huge 3-4 chapter saga where Molly is hunted down like a rabid dog. But yes, you are correct the focus was intended more on Discord and him beginning to change his ways...even if it was a bit harsh.
Good chapter, though rather a spontaneous ending. Also, why was molly so quick to turn to dark magic if its so polluting to the user, given her normal power already far outstrips the diminished demi-god's? It just seems rather rash and sudden, defiantly proving Celestia's worries about her instability. Feels as though it may have been better reserved for the confrontation itself, the corrupting influence creeping upon the alicorn as discord remained aloof to her initial attempts to resolve the situation. After all, she's not Celestia, so why would Discord even give her the time of day when there are far more important things on his mind?
Meh, I'm rambling again. ignore the above and keep up the good work
3434851 You have to understand that Molly is far more emotionally unstable than Celestia, due to her unique genesis. Ergo, she is going to be a lot more impulsive when it comes to making emotionally heavy decisions. In my head-canon Dark magic is closely tied to the caster's emotional state. The stronger the negative emotion (anger, greed, lust, hatred ect.) the stronger it's influence becomes.
While Molly might have known about it's corrupting influence, it was the easiest magic to conjure while in a state of anger. Canon wise, we all know Celestia can use dark magic so it's not unusual that Molly would be able to cast it. Remember that Discord was already curious about Molly in the previous chapter, so this is one of those situations where he would want to speak with her just to sate his own curiosity.
A pissed off Molly is a deadly Molly. Thank goodness Dusk and Pinkie showed up. Now, when are we going back to Cheerilee and Luna? Or those bastard sheep?
Every-one thinking it so I'm just gonna say it: How long until Dusk asks Molly to transform into "Solar Flare" while they cosplay?
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Humm, okaydoke! I see where you're coming from, it does work for her personality.
Can't wait for the next chapter, I already speculating on how messed up Discord's going to be when he finally comes around. This could well be the first time the ex-god of Chaos has ever faced mortality.
3436836 Trust me this is all part of the plan. A guilty Pinkie Pie makes a good nurse for a broken Discord
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3436368 By Shor's hairy nutsack....your new profile picture is GLORIOUS!!!
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^Have a complimentary kawaii baby Atricuno.
3439920 Thank you so much! You're the first to mention it, and I knew at first sight it was made for me. You are a man/pony who knows beauty when you see it.
I thought I remember reading about the Grand Galloping Gala coming up, I can only imagine the shenanigans going down there. Molly's gives Dusk a horn job in public, Vinyl changes the music to strip club beats and Pinkie starts peeling off her dress, Celestia realizes she's going to be the only one there who's not getting any after the dance...
3440918 You're quite welcome. I've always been a fan of pokemon, ever since the days of Red and Blue. Yes, the Gala will happen eventually but when exactly I can't say [I haven't written that far ahead yet ].
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Where's Luna and Cheerilee? ...I got the shipping correct, right?
3495339 They'll show up in the next chapter. I wanted to focus on Pinkie, Molly, Dusk and Discord for a few segments is all. Although...I'm not sure when the chapter will come out exactly. Hopefully in about two days. It depends on how motivated I feel (Which isn't very much at the moment )
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Well I had the site blocked for about a month now, and when I saw that you completed one chapter on this story...I was very sad. Hope there's more out soon!
You seem to have written the same line twice.
4195137 yes he does seem to have written the same line twice.