Due to a botched spell, Molestia is born. Eager to curb Molly's salatious ways, Celestia sends her to Ponyville to learn the magic of friendship from her most faithful student.
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i love this story, please dont ever stop writing this!
3593086 This story is quite a long way from being completed, so don't be sad dl.dropbox.com/u/21167245/FiMFiction/Emoticons/misc_Viny_sad.png
Wait wait wait... aren't Shiny and Cadence suposed to be together?
3593701 Originally they were going to be, but I changed my mind. Remember, this is an alternate universe...so anything can happen. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Emoticons/shrug_Derpy_Hooves.png
Well arranged marriage, somehow I foresaw this. Anyway, Shining Armor, isn't the only male to be a hero here, but then again Hilda is more of the independent female, which I like about her now as she shows and delivers in this story. But now that you added a griffon to the group, I cannot help but think of Shining X Hilda... yes, I can see this somehow happening.
3593874 Both Hailfire and Hilde, I'm not sure how far I'm going to take them at this point. As to the shipping potential of Hilde x Shining: it is very unlikely since she is, as you said, more of an independent female character. Maybe she'll get shipped later, with someone else. I honestly don't know yet. Concerning the arranged marriage, it felt right with the zebras. Rarely did they marry for love in tribal societies and I'm basically transposing African culture ( not that I'm an expert about it) in this instance.
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I know you did the zebra shipping with the correct means but really, I cannot help but think now of Shining X Hilde since a zebra, in any way you look at it, is another pony with a different culture. I do hope you do think about Shining and Hilde more, because from this point, Shining is not in love with the zebra.
3593931 They key word here is "Shining isn't in love with the zebra yet." Initially, Tash might be more into Shining than the reverse, but it's not like he doesn't find her attractive. That's why I put their promise near the end of the chapter. He's not going to force her to marry him. Could Hilde develop some feelings for Shining in the meantime, thus creating the dreaded ROMANTIC TRIANGLE? Possibly...but I hate pulling that particular literary device. It's cliche as fuck and I'm not a big fan of creating romantic tension as a plot device. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Mr_Cake.png
Many authors do but I don't like to.
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But you have to consider, background of Shining being there with his team for so long, and you'd think he would not look at Hilde. But I know I cannot argue against the writer and expect to win. Waiting on next chapter then.
3594023 Ah but who else has been on the team and is pony, that could be interested in Hilde?
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Not going to argue more, just going to state this.
A demolition expert who is traditional and open-minded, A mule who basically is always cranky and nothing good to say until you say something good to him first and A captain who takes into account the initial plan and considers the wants of the whole team.
But again, I have already lost.
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OMG! sad vinyl! SO CUTE!
So no Cadence in this universe then?
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Wait, there's going to be an end? ...I CAN'T FIND AN EMOTICON FOR RARITY ON HER FAINITNG COUCH!!! Also, we are getting Cadance to be shipped with someone else, right?
why DID you make its cadencexflash and shiningxoc? other than the reason of AU?
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Yes Cadence exists, she was in the last chapter and she's married to Flash Sentry.
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A thought had occurred to me: How different can this universe be if Twilight doesn't exist. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Emoticons/misc_TwilightWut.png Furthermore, I'm tired of everyone hating Flash for stealing their "waifu". I wanted to ship both Flash and SA with somepony different, just to throw a curve ball. It makes things interesting.
3598726 so what is shining suppose to be here?
he's obviously not captain of the guard but a major of a expeditionary company, any explanation for that?
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He's basically part of the Equestrian Expeditionary Forces. Think of it like the French Foreign Legion but for ponies. Zebrica and Equestria are allies in this universe and occasionally Celestia sends some troops down there to keep the peace.
3598803 why though?
3611316 Oopsie I was thinking in human terms when I wrote that. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Emoticons/shrug_Derpy_Hooves.png
I like it. A little curious tho. Is this a couple months in the past? How is Shining supposed to met up with his brother and maybe Flash/Cadence now?
"OK we're done here lets go home"
"Sir, we still have two months on the deployment. Our relief isn't even here yet."
"I SAID WE'RE DONE. GET ON THE TRAIN"
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I haven't gotten that far on SA's story arch yet to give you a solid answer. Although I can say that this particular event did not occur in the past. All of the characters are experiencing everything at more or less the same time (give or take a few days). They will eventually end up in Equestria, but as to when I can't say. This story has always been and will continue to be an organic process.
3619271 ok this story has gotten huge approval in my eyes because of this chapter. this story actually has the equeastrians as a competent military force now that like
3626762 Well if you think about, why wouldn't they have a competent military? Equestria is a nation-state and certainly Celestia isn't going to be able to be EVERYWHERE at once to keep the peace.
So now we meet Shining Armor. A very unique take on him, in my opinion. I wonder how Dusk will react to Shining having a bride? How will Shining react to Dusk being with Molly?
3627056 its just in nearly every fic i read the military is jack squat such from griffins to aliens they do nothing to stop them
3593732 Anything? ...Suddenly, G3 ponies! Maybe Flutterponies?