I rather like the way you are doing hero here. The we of a hive mind, and the I innately in disguise is a nice touch. I rather wonder the fun of things to watch go wrongly right about these folks.
5673564 Sometimes I think I might have bitten off more than I can chew... let alone swallow... so... I am gonna grit my teeth down and start chewing and see what happens.
5680480 ya it looks like that too. Most story's gives the readers time to know a new character before the next one is added. Now you have three to work with on that. This will be some interesting mouth full chewing.
" Despite the sexually alluring tone of the filly’s voice" Filly is the name for a female foal/kid pony... so unless she is underage should it be mare.
"and then went to select a pizzle from the rack of implements near where the whore was as she moved to present herself for her current owner’s pleasure." Looking pizzle up is it apparently old English slang for penis... so don't think that it means what you think it means.
Type 4 the new chapter.
That should be thank you 4 the new chapter. So much hate 4 spell check.
Congratulations, you just made the most unique group in the wasteland.
5672937 spell check can sock so match
5673388 I hope thats a good thing
Interesting cast, I like to see how you balance them out. just having two characters works well enough, but jumping to five mite be difficult.
I rather like the way you are doing hero here. The we of a hive mind, and the I innately in disguise is a nice touch. I rather wonder the fun of things to watch go wrongly right about these folks.
5673564 Sometimes I think I might have bitten off more than I can chew... let alone swallow... so... I am gonna grit my teeth down and start chewing and see what happens.
5673978 I just think it made sense for her to do that. as for whats gonna happen? spoilers.....
5680481 what will be, will be, and I look forward to it.
5680480 ya it looks like that too. Most story's gives the readers time to know a new character before the next one is added. Now you have three to work with on that. This will be some interesting mouth full chewing.
No words just
This gets more interesting every chapter.
Waiting for the next!
5681404 Hero channels her inner fluttershy
5685484 Thank you, gonna have to give them some sort of mission or something.
great read can't wait for the next chapter.
That "bat pony" should be catatonic. Her mind was broken, she was supposedly lacking emotion.
Also, this Alicorn is a moron.
" Despite the sexually alluring tone of the filly’s voice" Filly is the name for a female foal/kid pony... so unless she is underage should it be mare.
"and then went to select a pizzle from the rack of implements near where the whore was as she moved to present herself for her current owner’s pleasure." Looking pizzle up is it apparently old English slang for penis... so don't think that it means what you think it means.
"Come on.." 3 periods make an ellipse
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Puzzle was also a dried bulls penis used for brutal corporal punishment. Was known to draw a lot of blood