6071933 hehe. Well, i think id be taking the rad-away if she was armed here, but I do suppose it behooves her to be nice to hero out of something truly rare, honesty.
Probably, I'm nitpicking, but... I smiled, when I saw this in chapter 4: "Reverently Misty lowered her head as a tear ran down her mussel." I didn't smile when i saw this in chapter 6: "jerry-rigged trigger mechanism in the helmets mussel" I wrote this comment, when I saw it in chapter 7: "The batpony seemed to go crossed eyed looking at its own mussel" This is mussel. And what you meant is muzzle. I don't know what was your original typo, but you probably shouldn't accept the first thing that spellchecker tells you.
7132499 The artificial alicorns were part of a hive mind that had forcibly assimilated several well-known characters from the MLP:FIM show. The zipper-mouth trick was one of Twilight Sparkle's little foibles. It seems Serenity picked that up.
Bad Bad idea
Gosh darnit that scene when hero boops is darn adorable
Hero keeps on being cute, and even the grumpy stoned bat can't stay mad at them.
6070017 Sometimes bad ideas can lead to fun adventures!
6070303 Well Emjay did promise herself that no one would lift a hoof against her again... do boops count?
6070581 Well I wont say shes not mad.. but I think more... disarmed?
6071933 hehe. Well, i think id be taking the rad-away if she was armed here, but I do suppose it behooves her to be nice to hero out of something truly rare, honesty.
Probably, I'm nitpicking, but...
I smiled, when I saw this in chapter 4:
"Reverently Misty lowered her head as a tear ran down her mussel."
I didn't smile when i saw this in chapter 6:
"jerry-rigged trigger mechanism in the helmets mussel"
I wrote this comment, when I saw it in chapter 7:
"The batpony seemed to go crossed eyed looking at its own mussel"
This is mussel. And what you meant is muzzle.
I don't know what was your original typo, but you probably shouldn't accept the first thing that spellchecker tells you.
6073986 thank you, i have chap 8 started,
6074001 ohhh damn, will fix them in the morning, thank you for letting me know, and i will kick my proof reader too
edit, couldn't sleep till they were fixed, so fixed! still gonna kick my proof reader lol
Tidbit is quickly becoming my favorite character in this story.
not even going to ask
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The artificial alicorns were part of a hive mind that had forcibly assimilated several well-known characters from the MLP:FIM show. The zipper-mouth trick was one of Twilight Sparkle's little foibles. It seems Serenity picked that up.
"the light blue alicorn picked up her and Hero’s shirts" Its not garlic, it is one, so uni instead of ali... Sorry bad latin joke is bad.
Why did they drop her into the water suddenly, there probably would have been no problem if they didnt slam dunk her into the tub