I wish that damned bat would get her shit together. Alas, I feel as if it will never happen as she now has a set of things literally melded to her flesh now.
Tidbits gun roared again sending its down large bullets into the turrets metal shell.
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Whelp, shit, imp, and a fan are pretty bad for mixing. And quite an ending note.
If you use gdocs, I can edit for you mate.
It looks as if this place had been fooling around with Changelings DNA and or were experimenting on them in general.
I wish that damned bat would get her shit together.
Alas, I feel as if it will never happen as she now has a set of things literally melded to her flesh now.
Yikes, good fanfic so far though, I look forward to reading more.
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Pink Fog + Changeling Queen
Nasty combo.
Eww. Goo pony
7632725 goo pony?
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Dripping, slimy and tentacle...y
Goo.
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Tidbit's gun roared again, sending its large bullets down into the turret's metal shell.