What happens on Maidens Day is a closely guarded secret among pegasi and earth ponies. Now that Twilight is an alicorn, she'll have the chance to learn about it.
2935139 It does not. That doesn't stop people with an accent from saying it. (Actually, they say more "couldna," but "couldn'tve is easier to translate.)
Less than a week ago I was asking around wondering if anyone had written a good fic about ritual sex magic, and then this comes up.
This was fucking fantastic.
However, I do have a nitpick in that, even with the ritual magic helping them along, Rainbow Dash and Applejack crash way too hard and make up for it way too fast. That part probably should have doubled in length, so we could have really felt the romance budding before it rocketed away at a million miles an hour.
"Do you believe in magic? In a young mare's heart How the lovin' can free her Whenever she starts
And it's magic When your rhythm is groovy It makes you feel happy like a new-born cutie (lel) I'll tell you bout the magic through body and soul But it's like tryin' to reach the clouds from a deep-dug hole"
Or whatever <3
This fic maed me feel giddy. And renued, in the red-orange glow of sunrise I feel like some sort of prince. Well done, need to go bed, will read later <3
They're going to doom everyone by supplying too much magic! That was one of the most sensual and vivid pieces of erotic literature that I've ever read. That was truly incredible. I applaud you.
I have to say, I hate this author for dragging the setup out sooooo long, way to long on the leadup and really great stuff when you get there that's this and all my favorite clop in a nutshell Did I forget to add I love this author for dragging the setup out so long? Well I do
...Sure, a "terminal frost" is one of the things they're trying to avoid, but to me it sounds equally like epic weather and epic lovemaking (it helps that I got the album back when I had Appledash on the brain a lot anyway).
Oh my god. I legit came just imagining that magic scene. AJs point of view literally had this woman humping the bed and crying out to a rhythm that wasn't out here.
I finally fully see why this story was recommended to me, of all people. It's an extremely interesting look at two ponies who, each in their own way, don't feel like enough. It's interesting that this is the chapter where I finally piece that together, considering 80% of it is fucking lmao
Holy shit. I have no words.
There's sex...
Then there is THIS. You took a simple, pleasurable act, and made it incredible.
BRAVO.
I WILL be rereading this fic again!
~Skeeter The Lurker
Still my favorite line.
I feel like this line should have been in here;
"You've tasted the lightning, now here comes the thunder!"
This was incredible, now I can only hope for what's in the next chapter.
That line with the vine and Dash, and th one where AJ came an apple tree. Funny
I don't think that word exists :3
Still an amazing story.
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It does not. That doesn't stop people with an accent from saying it. (Actually, they say more "couldna," but "couldn'tve is easier to translate.)
But, thank you!
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Really? cuz mine was:
Only the premise of this fic could pull that off and mean it
Less than a week ago I was asking around wondering if anyone had written a good fic about ritual sex magic, and then this comes up.
This was fucking fantastic.
However, I do have a nitpick in that, even with the ritual magic helping them along, Rainbow Dash and Applejack crash way too hard and make up for it way too fast. That part probably should have doubled in length, so we could have really felt the romance budding before it rocketed away at a million miles an hour.
Im personally not into clop but the plot of this sounded interesting so I decided to check it out.
This was great! And I ship so that made it like 10x better.
I can't keep my motor running if you make me remember that image! Goddamn!
"Do you believe in magic?
In a young mare's heart
How the lovin' can free her
Whenever she starts
And it's magic
When your rhythm is groovy
It makes you feel happy like a new-born cutie (lel)
I'll tell you bout the magic through body and soul
But it's like tryin' to reach the clouds from a deep-dug hole"
Or whatever <3
This fic maed me feel giddy. And renued, in the red-orange glow of sunrise I feel like some sort of prince. Well done, need to go bed, will read later <3
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It does, except it's spelled "couldn't've"
They're going to doom everyone by supplying too much magic! That was one of the most sensual and vivid pieces of erotic literature that I've ever read. That was truly incredible. I applaud you.
Can't describe that scene in words. I mean, "Cosmic" comes close, but...
...here. I'll let this do it for me:
I decided to whip up my own personal stamp of approval for stories like this...
i.imgur.com/HCaNxvh.png?1
Now to go through my favorites and award it appropriately!
EDIT: Whoops, and I accidentally left my comment on the cloppiest chapter. Oh well...
I have to say, I hate this author for dragging the setup out sooooo long, way to long on the leadup and really great stuff when you get there that's this and all my favorite clop in a nutshell
Did I forget to add I love this author for dragging the setup out so long? Well I do
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Actually some of us from around here do say that word
More like could'ntuv(/tev)
My personal soundtrack for this chapter:
...Sure, a "terminal frost" is one of the things they're trying to avoid, but to me it sounds equally like epic weather and epic lovemaking (it helps that I got the album back when I had Appledash on the brain a lot anyway).
Now this is how you write a sex scene!!
Oh my god. I legit came just imagining that magic scene. AJs point of view literally had this woman humping the bed and crying out to a rhythm that wasn't out here.
I finally fully see why this story was recommended to me, of all people. It's an extremely interesting look at two ponies who, each in their own way, don't feel like enough. It's interesting that this is the chapter where I finally piece that together, considering 80% of it is fucking lmao