What happens on Maidens Day is a closely guarded secret among pegasi and earth ponies. Now that Twilight is an alicorn, she'll have the chance to learn about it.
An ancient fertility ritual that many dont even think excist anymore... That does not seem very... 'educating' Twi... get the hell out of there. Why!? It seems so exciting! I dont think you want to go there.... Pleeeeeeease?? I just warned you Twi... it does not seem very... Eye-Freindly.
A mysterious celebration, pagan like rituals, maidens, 666 WORDS?!?! What horrors will await us in this terrifying fic as we uncover the shocking, disgusting truth of- oh it's a slice of life romance.... What enchanting tales of romance will await us in this fic of pure whimsy as we uncover the shocking truth of Maiden's day?!?!?
2933557 Sex as part of a religious/mystic ceremony, especially one focused on something like fertility, is hardly unknown in the real world. This includes sex involving pairings who are selected through semi-random means at the just before the act. As such it would hardly be a stretch to have a story about such a ceremony in a fictional context, (and given that we are talking about a world where magic of various types really does exist, the ceremony may even work).
Reconstructed/reinvented ceremonies also really do get sex inserted if it 'seems right', 19th century reinventions are notorious for this.
2933557 More or less what's said here. The story sets itself up to be incredibly predictable. I feel like reading farther would only tell me details--since I can already see how it goes. I can't see the end, mind you, but I can definitely see the next chapter, or maybe 2, which makes me disinclined to keep reading.
Surprising fertility ritual... Rainbow Dash and Applejack... sex tag... Celestia in troll mode... hoo boy.
This on top of the whole "one tribe being totally kept in the dark" thing being kind of off-putting, especially when they chose to leave in the first place.
Heh... 666 words.
Also. The very start of this story indicates shit will get wild.
~Skeeter The Lurker
Hot diggity dawg. Dis gon be good.
An ancient fertility ritual that many dont even think excist anymore...
That does not seem very... 'educating'
Twi... get the hell out of there.
Why!? It seems so exciting!
I dont think you want to go there....
Pleeeeeeease??
I just warned you Twi... it does not seem very... Eye-Freindly.
... ... This is going to be good
666 words exactly
A mysterious celebration, pagan like rituals, maidens, 666 WORDS?!?!
What horrors will await us in this terrifying fic as we uncover the shocking, disgusting truth of- oh it's a slice of life romance.... What enchanting tales of romance will await us in this fic of pure whimsy as we uncover the shocking truth of Maiden's day?!?!?
Am I the only one who becomes incredibly concerned when Twilight Sparkle asks if there will be fire?
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Sex as part of a religious/mystic ceremony, especially one focused on something like fertility, is hardly unknown in the real world. This includes sex involving pairings who are selected through semi-random means at the just before the act. As such it would hardly be a stretch to have a story about such a ceremony in a fictional context, (and given that we are talking about a world where magic of various types really does exist, the ceremony may even work).
Reconstructed/reinvented ceremonies also really do get sex inserted if it 'seems right', 19th century reinventions are notorious for this.
...I hope Rarity enjoys herself in the spa.
im trippin balls. i just halucinated and a shadow freed itself from awall and it ripped my apart. ow my head.musnt sleep. bye.
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We are for sure going to hell for this.
How long did it take for you to write a chapter with exactly 666 words and still be grammatically correct? Lol
This is going to be a very interesting story, I can feel it. Twi is in for a very rude awakening.
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More or less what's said here. The story sets itself up to be incredibly predictable. I feel like reading farther would only tell me details--since I can already see how it goes. I can't see the end, mind you, but I can definitely see the next chapter, or maybe 2, which makes me disinclined to keep reading.
666 words at the start of a mature fic? That cannot be coincidence.
Surprising fertility ritual... Rainbow Dash and Applejack... sex tag... Celestia in troll mode... hoo boy.
This on top of the whole "one tribe being totally kept in the dark" thing being kind of off-putting, especially when they chose to leave in the first place.
Oh my God, this is going to break Twilight's mind, I know it. 😬