Damn now I wish I had some Pon-e. Then again I might make for a lousy pony, I'd miss my hands too much.

I dont get it. Is the story over or not?

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my face when cocaine addicts will be on this stuff like flies to shit

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HIDE YO COCAINE ADDICTS HIDE PON-E ADDICTED DA-----UGHTER I BE JUMPING IN YO WINDOWS KIDNAPING YO ADDICTS

TO KEEP AS PETS!!!!!

Does an OD kill you or make you a pony permanently?
(Please let it be the second one)

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There's a sort of planned next part.
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Oh yes, OD'ing results in permapony.

This was a good story not the best, but still pretty good. The ending was a seemed bit rushed too.

I find myself torn between my love of transformation fictions, and my seething dislike for second person fictions...
Hmmm, "Dark". Well, I'll take that to mean there will at least be some conflict in the story. You have my interest for now. Continue with this.

I desire more of this.

Favourited for an great original take on the common human-pony transformation.

Man, Pon-E? You shouldn't mess around with that shit, man.
Me and White Jim and Rawdog used to whip shitties in the high school parking lot and then get all ponied up and sneak back into class, all adorable as fuck. At least until White Jim got expelled for nuzzling the vice principle, who's allergic to horse dander.

One year tho we got tickets to Burning Stallion and we were in the back of the van of this guy who sold bridles, just d'awwwing (That's where you mix Pon-E and MDMA) and this huge dude comes in just all pissed off, all like "which one of you was petting my filly" so White Jim just takes our entire stash right there man and just starts unicorning the fuck out.
I heard she goes around to schools now and warns kids about the dangers of irresponsible squeeing.

(Upvoted and tracked - I really want to see this Scene come to life)

gotta get me some of this shiz baked into a brownie

no wait

baked into a cupcake

Dislike

This time with a reason: The story has an incredibly misleading title. I thought this was a Wall-E crossover, not just more porn.

2674820 you should have read the description then

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Why would I? I see the word Pon-E and I instantly think Wall-E, then I went onto the page, saw that it wasn't a Wall-E crossover but instead a clop-fic with a VERY misleading title and disliked it.

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Your "show image" link is bigger than the actual image. Good job.

This intrigues me. I hope you make another chapter.

The idea looks interesting enough. I can't wait till the [Dark] sets in with police raids, little ponies on the run in the woods and all that stuff.
In other news: I came here after reading "Pon-E Bust".

Give Two years, a private facility and a government grant, and I could probably start producing it.

I'm being serious, by the way.

2785864 What do you men 'probably'?

2796009 I give myself 100% chance.

2799910 You'll feel even better if you just admit it.

Update?

Bwuhh...gaaaahhh....I don't know what my emotions are doing. And if there's a "The End", shouldn't you mark this complete?

All this from tomato sauce byproducts. Who'd have thought?

In any case, a fascinating case study of the addict in his natural environment. Perhaps the lightest dark fic I've read on the site, at first blush, at least. I look forward to more, should it come.

My turn bitches out of the way my life sucks lol that's how this world works yahoo know

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Because jumping to conclusions is a lazy and/or unaffective strategy when there are so many fanfics with similar titles yet different story lines.
The dislike button is for the quality of the story, for the story description. not a searching inconvenience. .
If the description promised a Wall-E crossover, or even in the tags (Like the Crossover Tags) then it would deserve a dislike.
You made the simple mistake of judging a book by its cover. It is not the creator's fault, nor the story's fault.
Just be more careful when you search, and don't make a bigger deal out of it than it needs to be.

UPDATE!!!!

...Please?

I would defiantly take some of that Pon-E stuff in a heartbeat

Update?

Gives to me your updates please, because I want moar! :3

I'd take some of that Pon-E and overdose so i can be a pony forever!!!

Who wants to help me develop something like this? Anyone?

3620557 sounds like only too much fun ..

3763980 We must make Pon-E. For science. And those who are still alive.

3764114 where do we start?

3764267 I dunno.

3766697 maybe desiding exactly what our version of the Pon-E would be like, how it was to affect the user, in what form it was to be, and for how long said effects would last?

or, you're just going to replicate the work?

If that's the case, you'd need to find al the original ingredientes?

3766820 I would replicate it because it is perfect as it is. I could extend the time you are a pony and the time you should not take more than one in. Which one do you think is better? (This question is directed at everyone,up vote for replication, down vote for extension.)

3771378 for the Pon-E? I guess we could keep it as it was.
Then we could have various versions, thus slightly differently named, from 'Pon-A' to 'Pon-Z' if so desired.
Ofhorce, it was never mentioned why the mentioned rules should not be broken.
What happened if you did? would it make the addiction progress in some manner, or make it less enjoyable, in traditional manner, or would it just turn you deeper into the transformation changes?

I guess the warnings should be pronounced, but there may be an idea to add a few more?

3771425 if you remember,the drug makes everything that already feels good become pure ecstasy. I'm quite sure that breaking the rules makes it harder for someone to not overdose just to keep the high going. Naming yourself when a pony is an example of someone becoming attached to their pony form,the exact same kind of attachment that causes sadness when a loved one dies. One that makes it harder for someone to wish to be a human again.

3774857 oh, the rules are there, in order to protect them, in order to keep them on a steady and safe dosage?

I guess I like the idea.

I have used some ideas to have people changed, by have them slip out of who they were.

Finally, got around to reading this, anyways good story, but I don't like how soon it ended, I don't like endings.

It's only a matter of time before the SCP Foundation finds out about this, and takes a sample. All of them. And deliver Class-A amnesiacs to everybody involved. Then take in all the OD'd consumers into the Foundation to find a cure and interrogate them. After they're successfully cured (if they aren't dead for whatever reason), they'll be reintegrated into society and their amnesiacs administered.

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…So, quick! While it lasts, complete the Pon-E! And then hide it!

P.S. Nice concept, by the way. My only disappointment is the lack of a detailed transformation.

I'm a crazy person... So here's a crazy thought. What if you made a sequel? You left the story in that area so why not? what could possibly go wrong?

4381571 welll I do have a sorta sequel in the form of "Pon-E Blackouts"