Progress and editing. · 12:26pm Dec 12th, 2023
Look at them, it the hero's of the story!
Look at them, it the hero's of the story!
So ya, I got several chapters in, and I think I wrote myself into a corner. In the end much of it had to be scrapped in favor of a slower paise that lets new characters and settings get a better introduction, along with a subplot conflict. What I got down so far feels a lot better, feeling far less rushed.
Some things getting more attention are:
I've been done for a while, but now the last chapter is out for you to read. Yay! Now let me know if you enjoyed the story, of if it was just a long slog that you pushed yourself to finish, feedback is always welcomed. (Proper feedback, not just "You suck, go jump in a fire.")
Yep, the story's conclusion is approaching, and I hope you love it. that said, if you have questions, or wanting more, I will be willing to say a few thing if you wish to know. Be sure of a few things first, if it's not written down in a story, it could be be changed, so any information on what I'll do next is nebulous. There are certainty points I plan on doing, places and names that have come up in the story, but how it will be done is not set.
https://derpibooru.org/images/2696743
As we all know about Fallout: Equestria, the diet of wastelanders is far different from that of pones of old Equestria. (Still, why did Applejack keep pigs?)
so ya, is this realistic for the ponies, would they and could they start eating meat?
So lest talk nasty mutant besties.
So progression on the new story is going well, though I know a bunch of rewrites is due once I go back and check on the chapters. currently have a spooky horror chapter, and plan on a rest chapter before going super dark.
Onto the topic in the image, raiders, or what exactly gets a person the label of a raider.
oh look, guns....
Scroll is back, and with it a backlog of chapters to put out, so pay him a visit and say something nice.
So if things keep going as they are, I might go back to my weekly schedule for Desperados, yay to that. and if things go real well, chapters my come out in batches, which means you all might get to see the end to Desperados sooner.
Look, Look! It's Harp Melody and Order, with her guns!
That aside, as of right now, I have finished Desperados and only need the remaining chapters to be edited. This means I can work on other stories I have either started but not put out, or begin planning in detail the next story. Fun times ahead yaknow.
did a commishion.
Ya, I need to relay put more effort in finding an editor on get on this, more my bad than anyone's. That aside, I am almost done, three more chapters to wright, and an epilogue. Our three hero's have gone though a lot, and come out of the fire changed, though the costs might have been more for some, and another is looking at an impossible task. Read to find out.
as of now, I got less then ten chapters to go, so fun time. After that it will be all up to anyone helping me with the edits. Unfortunately, I may have to push my once a week updates to every other week in hopes it dose not catch up with the unedited chapters. I did find someone to help me out, but their plate is full as it is, so it's slow going for edits unless someone else joins up to help me out.
Woo, almost done looking over the current batch of chapters, finding what mistakes I've made, and adding anything to make the later chapters make more sense. t's good to review your own story. also I had a friend edit a chapter, so I'll need to look over that before it's ready. Once all that's done, then it's time to start the beginning of the end, yep almost done with Desperados, and I just don't know what I'm going to do with this part. Well I have some ideas, characters talking, one last bit
Not much new to say, but I did finish this nice peace, a bit of a look at the future for Star Charter.