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Dice Warwick


Dislexic tring to wright storys, makes gammer natzie eyes bleed.

Oct
9th
2023

Update on the next story! · 2:42pm Oct 9th, 2023


Oh, new OC! isn't she cute.

So, for those interested, I am working on Desperados Volume 3, and several chapters roughly in. Though I'm still feeling out how everything should go, I am at the point that I have a good idea what I'll be doing and where everything should fall into place. Unlike with Star Charters story, this one is a bit more complex with characters and motivations. Mainly, I need to make it, so this don't "Just Happen" and that the flow of the story makes sense. This also involves new characters among which some will stick around even after this volume is over. Vollum 2 was mainly about dealing with Stars issue, and closing up the whole thing involving Percussion Cap, but not really expanding the story pasted Star herself. This too will lead into Volume 4 in Slowtrots Story, though he is going to have less emotional baggage like Star and Harp had, and more having to face how messed up Wartime Equestria had become. Oh, and if you read "A Wastelanders Tale" it had a hint in which a certain old pony will make a return, and he may be bringing his granddaughter with him. XP

So ya, things are coming along farly well, though the chapters will need some rewriting... a lot of rewriting actualy. But the further I get into the story, the more I know what I want to do. Oh, and the introduction of new characters has been fun! Such as Fizzy Fusion Pop, who is quickly becoming a fun rival for Harp in the charisma category, and counter in intelligence. Or at least I hope so, sofar I have just been building up her role in the story, and how she will fit in the overall narrative. As of now, I have a strong direction of what I'll be doing with her, which will quite grim-dark narrative wise.

So ya, I am getting things done, and making a lot of nice art. Fizzy herself already has a bunch of art of her I made, just be warned, she is a NSFW character, and has a naturally lewd body. But as part of Desperados, anything NSFW will be kept suggested or just mentioned after the fact.

Comments ( 3 )

I bet Fizzy would say the secret ingredient to her cola and the key to success with the business is love . . . juices?

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Actuary yes, though she avoids the juices part, as it effects the flavor and turns it into an aphrodisiac.

Can't wait and see how this story unfolds ❤️❤️❤️
Also happy spooky month 💀💀💀

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