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Mar
1st
2020

A ticklish Pegasus has been polished up a bit · 9:51pm Mar 1st, 2020

Being new to writing my style was a bit all over the place, random new lines and proper paragraphs being intermittent.
But after getting some helpful advice from other writers, (you know who you are, thanks a bunch!) I have got it more organised, I will be doing the same to all my other stories, I will say here when that takes place as well as on the description of the story itself.

Hope you like the improvements and enjoy anything new I come up with in the future!

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Jan
8th
2019

Being a Better Writer: Creating a Paragraph · 5:32pm Jan 8th, 2019

Welcome back readers! And welcome to the year 2019! Which, as we all know, is either infested with replicants or about to become the battleground once again between that blue robot known as Megaman and his nemisis, Dr. Wily.

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May
2nd
2016

Being a Better Writer: Sentence Construction and "Run-ons" · 9:13pm May 2nd, 2016

Sentence construction is one of those touchy things with a lot of novice writers. Personally, I blame the education system for not doing an adequate job explaining things, but the truth of the matter is that there are a lot of young writers out there (or worse, novice critics) who pass judgement on their own or others work without knowing much about what they’re actually passing judgement on. In the best case scenario, this leads to confusing feedback. In the worst-case scenario? Bad

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Jun
22nd
2017

No paragraphs? WHAT!?! · 11:14pm Jun 22nd, 2017

So here I am writing a few things right? Just writing down some stories until BOOM I read at the bottom of the screen:

0 paragraphs. You have very few paragraphs in this story. remember to put two spaces between each paragraph.

Seriously!?!? Ugh. Now I gotta tell my friends and REWRITE JUST ABOUT EVERYTHING!!!

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Feb
9th
2016

The Craft of Writing: Paragraphs (Part 1) · 1:45pm Feb 9th, 2016

Imagine, for a moment, the most exciting blog post you have ever read. The most exciting blog post you can even dream about. It has action, adventure, drama, sex, danger!

Yeah, something like that. Source.

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Feb
21st
2017

My Statistics 2 · 5:15pm Feb 21st, 2017

DAvWC (Daily Average Word Count): 4,486
TWC (Total Word Count): 417,262 (421,860 if you count my rejected story)
AvSWC (Average Story Word Count): 6,419/ (6,391 if you count the rejected story)
Total Stories: 65/ (66 if you count the rejected story)
3 Fan Requests so far (currently as of 2/21/2017)
Followers: 85

And For Comparison against my Two and One Month (respectively)

DAvWC: +723, +1,545
TWC: +183,494, +325,276
AvSWC: -3,189.9375, -6,471.25892857143

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Jan
26th
2017

My Statistics 1 · 3:00am Jan 26th, 2017

3,751.451612903226 per day (well within the range of 4,000 that some can do)
TW: 232,590
My Average story Word Count (Total Words divided by Total Stories) was 9,691.25 (which puts each story into a novelette).
My followers were 43 at that point.
And I had Zero Fan Requests.
Total Stories: 24
(As of 1/21/2017)

But that was as of a Two Month Average.

Here is the One Month.
Followers: 18

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Oct
14th
2019

Being a Better Writer: Checklisting · 9:29pm Oct 14th, 2019

Hey readers! Welcome back to another installment of Being a Better Writer. Not only that, but it’s a normal installment! That’s right, the Summer of Cliche Writing Advice is over and done!

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May
28th
2016

I still don't know how to start my story properly. :/ · 6:10am May 28th, 2016

Introduction, how many sentences in a paragraph I should have, what my main character will look like.

I need help...

May
17th
2018

does anyone still watch children's horse show · 3:51pm May 17th, 2018

David Rapp wrote "Newbie Dash", "Flutter Brutter", and "Where the Apple Lies" for season 6, and more recently "The Parent Map" for season 8. On the last one, I kept wondering, "who is this aimed at?" and it occurred to me to check for a pattern in the writer's credits.

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Jul
20th
2019

Bad Book Review 06.5 (The Guardian, Chapter 07 full scene direct quote) · 6:13pm Jul 20th, 2019

No new chapter today. Doing something a little different.

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Jan
18th
2016

S5 Finale, other aspect view. (Why do I like MLP anyways?) (–and bleeding into my cares, words. Super sleepy rant) · 10:46am Jan 18th, 2016

Normally a meat-appreciation isn't so necessary to apprieciate the finer-morale of a children's story. (funny, as children can randomly be less biased by obvious interpretations, depending personal culture.)

Anyhow. S5 final was less charm and more intrigue, mystery and drama suspense, with a bit of bedazzlement. Compared to our usual post-modern fairy tale-ish MLP.

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Apr
28th
2021

Well, this is strange... · 7:54pm Apr 28th, 2021

So guys, today I came home to find some no doubt dashing and handsome stranger had left me a package! But that's not all! This most probably charming and brilliant man left me a package sent to me from the Russian Federation!

Well. Only one way to solve this! Better open her up!

Hmm. Something down there. And it's purple! What could it be?

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Jun
22nd
2016

My Friend Published Her First Story! Go Read it! · 8:04pm Jun 22nd, 2016

Idk why this is derping. Link: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/334239/a-story-about-you
After months of prodding, my friend [url=fimfiction.net/user/CrispySparrow]CrispySparrow has finally released her first story, which Horse Voice calls "an effectively chilling piece." Go read the unsettling [url=fimfiction.net/story/334239/]A Story About You today!

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