One Sentence Reviews: Foalcare 101 · 9:08am Feb 26th, 2018
A well written, yet dull story about Cheerilee turning herself into a baby in order to teach her class about foalcare.
A well written, yet dull story about Cheerilee turning herself into a baby in order to teach her class about foalcare.
Illya Leonov has graced me with a reading of The Longest Sentence!
As of today I will be attempting a novel concept: Summarizing and giving my opinion of different stories in only a single sentence. I have no Idea how well this will go, but I hope to at least entertain as many of you as well highlight some good, bad, and so bad it's good stories for you.
While the writing and the characterization is great, and the premise is one I have enjoyed in many other stories, this story seems to be the embodiment of "slow burn."
A hilarious tale about an unrepentant asshole working as Blueblood's butler and loving every second of it.
Nothing so serious as yesterday's blog (and do help out Novel Idea if you can.) I'd just like to get a quick Strawpoll on a certain matter.
As always, please leave the comments section civil.
I'm announcing a minor project that'll be in the works for a while before it hits Fimfiction. It's a baseball-centric crossover between MLP and the Touhou Project.
...No, I wasn't using a random crossover generator.
Sentence construction is one of those touchy things with a lot of novice writers. Personally, I blame the education system for not doing an adequate job explaining things, but the truth of the matter is that there are a lot of young writers out there (or worse, novice critics) who pass judgement on their own or others work without knowing much about what they’re actually passing judgement on. In the best case scenario, this leads to confusing feedback. In the worst-case scenario? Bad
Dearest Writer's Block,
This is Grammer a Week, the periodic blog program-thing where I address a frequently broken grammar rule and tell you how to fix it. This week's installment is about sentence structure. Yeah, it seems like a boring concept, but trust me: it's a subject worth knowing. If you know your sentence structures well, making unique, interesting, and varied sentences will become easier. Oh, and you know those pesky commas that you don't know where to place? A good half of those comma issues can be
This is disgusting. It's incomprehensible. Why would anyone do this!?
And there are other videos out there confirming this. It's...
No. Just... no.
If anyone can spread the word, pray and send help to the child's parents, who are against his legalized murder, please do so.
A few days ago on a thread of The Writer's Group, a user named WhispersintheDark had posted a little writing game where it challenged anyone to write up a horror story by using only two sentences. I thought the challenge was interesting enough so I decided to throw my hat into the ring. Eventhough I have never attempted such a thing before, I thought it would be fun to try out. So
I swear I'm unable to write consistently, I used to write maybe twelve different stories at one time and never finished one, I only added more to the list. Thank god my tablet broke and I lost my data, it would have otherwise driven me further insane. I was however, disappointed in losing the beginning chapter to a Tolkien and George R. R. Martin inspired story, but it was the price I had to pay. Anyway, the reason I am writing this is to alert you to my inefficientcy at deadlines, I had
Introduction, how many sentences in a paragraph I should have, what my main character will look like.
I need help...
Have a tiny excerpt:
Nightmare Moon stood in the crossroads, regal and horrific in equal measure. Wings draped around the mare like a cloak, the long primary feathers fading to nothing before touching the dirt that embraced Chrysalis. Hooves armored in cobalt plating hovered just off the soil, not so much as a shadow of the Mare in the Moon even touched the ground, but her gaze weighed heavily on Chrysalis.
Not much in a mood to read. Seeing nice little things, but no forcing it.
It's like me eating too much sugary stuff today whilst writing in those motebooks, and thinking of stuff.
I couldn't eat as much real food as I desired cause I wasn't hungry enough. And ain't being any soon.
I won't even try. I may, but if I ain't. I ain't.
Also, those notebooks really are too small, and slightly too chocolate covered at points.
Convicted shooter Dylann Roof is escorted June 18, 2015, from the Cleveland County Courthouse in Shelby, N.C. (Photo: Chuck Burton, AP)
LANCASTER, Penn. (AP) - The hacker who stole nude photos of female celebrities in 2014 has been sentenced to 18 months in federal prison, officials announced on Thursday.
In a court in May, Ryan Collins, a 36-year-old from Lancaster, Pennsylvania, pleaded guilty to federal hacking charges and admitted to a two-year phishing scam to gain passwords of more than 100 people, including actors Jennifer Lawrence and Aubrey Plaza and singers Rihanna and Avril Lavigne.
Link to Part One and Link to Part Two. Once again, This review contains full spoilers of everything Attack on Titan, including and especially the ending of the manga.