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Deadder
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I'm actually good making up titles, but this story idea I have is just challenging. All the good titles are taken (not that I would think of them. :twilightsheepish:) I like thinking hard, but this idea just gets me. Way too hard! :raritydespair:

The titles I've brainstormed:

Double P: Pound and Pumpkin

Poundy and Pumpy Cakes

Need to know what's all about? Read on.
Pound loves Pumpkin. (No fucking shit, Deluxe.) Everyday, he just wants to be by her side no matter what.
They're about 16-18 years old by the way.
In short, he wants to bone her. I don't want to explain in too much detail.

However, one day, Pumpkin is invited to a Canterlot school. The school of magic for unicorns and other bullcrap. The one Twilight went to. I apologize for my nonsense. Pretty tired from the stuff I had to do.

Anyway, the entrance exam. She fucking passed it like a boss. Pound is deeply saddened by this. (No shit again, Deluxe.)

As Pumpkin packs up, Pound wants to be with his sister. In this story, Pumpkin has that elder sister tone.

Or maybe I watch too much hentai.

ANYWAY, Pound doesn't want to arouse suspicion of him being with her sister as far as living with her in Canterlot. She had dorms, but Pound loves her that much and goes to Canterlot also.

Shit happens as Pound's small life in the high society. Shit no good for him. He watches Pumpkin in her academy. Creeper mode. About a few months of shit jobs and that crap, Pumpkin drops in for a visit.

Mind you that Pound is living horribly. Pumpkin sees that and visits Pound every day, making the pegasus quite happy.

And shit goes down again when a death god, shinigami in Japanese, drops in for a visit. I watch weird stuff by the way. Goes well with my twisted mind.

A mare shinigami reveals itself to Pound and Pumpkin one night, telling that Pound will die in a week. She says her job was to escort Pound's soul so he could die properly.

Pumpkin becomes outraged.

She asks if there's anyway to stop his coming death.

Oh, there's a way alright.

The said stallion must impregnate a mare and would live another 10 years.

You guys want to read it? Please say that so MAYBE I can publish it tomorrow.

Thank you. :twilightsmile:

And a big thanks to Waldo the Digital_Hex for motivating me indirectly! :rainbowlaugh:

1218654 Here's a title idea: Pumpkining His Pound

Pumpkin Flavored Pound Cake?


I got nothin.

1218654 um...

They're brother and sister, right?

1218654

A Pound for a Pumpkin?

(Not sure if that one's been taken by The Pumpkin's Pounding series yet)

I lost it after the mare Shinigami :rainbowlaugh: That was a "...and then they fucked!" moment.

Anyway, "Pounded Pumpkin" is taken already so I'll suggest "One Pound of Pumpkin" or "Cake Batter", hopefully that'll help.

Deadder
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1218666
Thank you! :rainbowkiss: That's three!

Also, the one who suggested the name will get credit!

1218670
Eeyup. :eeyup: Know how you feel.

1218671
Yes. Yes they are.

1218672
And four! I'll try to find a way and check. Thanks!

Deadder
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1218682
And it did! :rainbowkiss: Thank you!

1218696 Pump Pu Kinndkin

Smashing Pumpkins

Price of a Pound

A Pound of Pumpkins Makes a Great Cake? I don't know, I'm totally crazy from sleep deprivation.:pinkiecrazy:

1218654

Getting Pumpkin In Pound's Cake

1218672>>1218654
That one is clean, lol. Feel free if it strikes your fancy :derpytongue2:

This post makes me laugh. Bwahahahaha.

1218654

Here's a title for ya.

"Stop writing about me fucking my brother."

Seriously, don't we have enough of these? I mean holy shit, this is getting run into the ground harder than Pony Does Thing fics!

Not just that, but it sounds like a crossover with concepts shown in Bleach. Seriously.



Honestly, just... stop writing about them. Please. It's getting painful now. If you wanna pull off this concept properly, have them go through several boyfriends and girlfriends BEFORE turning to each other. Make incest the last resort!

Fucking hell...

I love how people are saying that the idea is so overdone. Almost as overdone as Rainbow Dash or Twilight getting shipped with ANYTHING. But no, it's this one in particular they complain about. Write down the story, then come up with a title later. It doesn't have to be a pun, either :raritywink:

1218654
I don't have a name, but I would avoid jumping on the bandwagon and making the title into a pun. For one, puns are some of the worst forms of humor, in my opinion. Two, try to differentiate yourself from the only other notable fanfiction that involves the pair, namely Waldo's trio of stories. Differentiate yourself and find something memorable. If you go against the grain, it makes it just a little bit more memorable.

1218654

Another Pound of Pumpkin
Another Pumpkin Pounding
One Pounded Pumpkin
Pumpin' Pumpkin By The Pound (try sayin' that five times fast:trollestia::trollestia::trollestia:)
Pumpkin Pound Platte (I think the shinigami's name should be Platte)

Also....

A mare shinigami reveals itself to Pound and Pumpkin one night, telling that Pound will die in a week. She says her job was to escort Pound's soul so he could die properly.

Remind me again, WHAT KIND OF CRACK HAVE YOU BEEN SNORTING!?!?!?!?!:flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage:
I also know the name of the hentai you're referencing to here; nice choice.:trollestia::trollestia::rainbowlaugh:

1218942
I agree, puns are terrible.

1218671 As the saying goes: Wincest is best, put your sister to the test!:pinkiehappy:

1218907 You say that like it's a bad thing.:rainbowkiss:

The cake is a lie.

Deadder
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1218731
Thanks for the names! :raritywink:

1218744
I like that! And I feel you!

1218842
Thank you! :rainbowkiss:

1218891
Well it's an idea that I HAVE to write about. Sorry if this doesn't suit your taste.

1218906
Why not? :rainbowlaugh:

1218907
Kind of. Maybe. Yes. No.

1218938
It's already broadly written out. Just the title gets me.

1218942
That's what I'm trying to do!

1218971
Thanks! :twilightsmile: I haven't snorting anything. :rainbowlaugh:

:twilightsheepish: Also what's the title? I forgot it!

1219252
That's doable!

1220332

It's not a question of taste, it's a question of repetition. This idea's been done to death, buddy, and the concept could be done between any two ponies that are relatively close and are of opposite genders.

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