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Someones enjoying themselves, Hehe, fun to read these in a psychotic sort of way.
Wish you luck with reading the rest of her adventures so far.
Oh geez, I'm sorry you had to see that, I'm sorry you had to do that. As for why that stallion chooses to live a life as a slaver, well... The world you now find yourself in is incredibly... difficult. Ponies everywhere are constantly struggling to make ends meet, to keep themselves alive, to provide for their families. Everypony wants to be happy, and some ponies think that it's okay to take others' happiness away from them. It's all just so messed up. But you, today you were a hero. It may not feel like it, given what you had to do, but make no mistake, you changed those ponies' lives for the better, and they are never going to forget how you've saved them. I would bet it tottaly sucks playing the part of hero or savior, but when you think of all the light you could bring do a darkened land, I would imagine it kind of makes it worthwhile. No matter what you choose, I'll be with you. So go out and go do you! Woo hoo! Go Thirteen!
an abandoned wreck that was once another ponies home.
pony's
Please be more liberal with commas, I have a hard time figuring out when one idea ends and another starts.
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This, this is the first time I've ever heard this. people I've talked to always say I used too many commas, and now its coming back to haunt me in the other direction. Hahaha. Time to start using more commas, like everywhere I can, right? If you're wondering about the over use of commas here, its for fun. Think I need to master the use of the ; next as well.