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That last paragraph...
ghost rider?
I think the last paragraph is from a Dr.Who episode
I've been waiting for an update and I'm impressed, I love the OWB style, with it's own twist in this universe!
Wow, a red suit with a skull where the head should be.
Well I'd assume a skull would indicate it doesn't have eyes anymore. So I'm going to guess this is one of those suits. Sounds decently intelligent if it would question why the lights are off.
Let's hope it's friendly at least. Things with skulls for heads haven't had a real friendly history in the Fallout Equestria setting. I remember the lost herd from Pink eyes. Hehehe, ohboy was that a slaughter.
5284760 5284954 5285820 you guys apparently dont know fallout nv. its a dlc from that. therefore, enemies are relatable to that. i look forward to seeing another enemy from the dlc in this fanfic all imma say for everything else is 'dis gon be gud'
the only twist is trixie, but it fits
5287322 Between 11 & 12, there is a gap in what happens. We have absolutely no way to tell how big the gap is, and we only know that Cait left the building for some reason (I think they split up, still don't know why he left the building though) Lovebug ran into a Music Box that apparently knocked her out, and made her forget about said music box. (AKA Plot Hole/Device)
Also, the medical bit pisses me off since before then you only mentioned her being medical twice. First was a small mention inthe beginning, that you seemed to pass over in order to say that "I'm a sniper!" And then everything went to hell at the stable. The second mention was her spending an insane amount of caps for one sub par medical book, with a single spell that isn't very efficient or effective, and then two percent of that for a spell that is much, much more useful. (When ponies break out into song, they seem perfectly willing to tell you anything, and then almost completely forget about it. Queen of Changelings, have her sing and you will know all her plans for example) Yes, you have made her slightly merciful, but she isn't a Velvet. Look at how quickly she was willing to tell Maul(?) where the scientists are, and she even offered to help!
On the subject of Maul, what was with the sudden turnaround? BEFORE he saw Dr. Delicious (Lovebug) he had so much rage it could not be contained, and he got excited when he heard a door open (Can't blame him for getting so excited about revenge, but he shouldn't be holding quite that much rage if you are going to make him stop pummeling the protagonist). He beat the hell out of 13, and stopped when he found that she tasted odd, different. This guy chews on bones, and knows the taste of pony/ghoul flesh (Side note, this guy was eating Ghoul. I don't think any kind of immune system can handle that) well enough to say that she was not a pony, and for some reason he found that to be enough reason to listen to her freaking life story. Cannibal, with enough rage to fuel a nuclear plant, decided to listen to a taking bug instead of just squeezing it until it said where the scientists were, then popping it and moving on to kill the ones that made him that way (after that, who knows and who cares? Just another Frankenstein's monster wandering around.)
So despite Lovebug's previous issues with ponies that eat meat, she is downright enthusiastic to help him out... Oh, and Cait has been outside with three badass robots that say they are a part of the Nightmare Nighters (Side note: Two ts are introduced at the same time, and they aren't fighting? Shame...) while all we know of them is that the leader hates grown ups, and apparently has a stick up her flank. Yet there they are, helping Cait. The protagonist should always either know something, be encountering The Plot, or finding out what something is in about five minutes.
And on a more important note, you reminded me that this story has a physically painful amount of minor errors that I didn't correct. I will try to do some small edits (mostly spelling, not the best in grammar, but I can help) when I have time and am less tired.
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you know that was mean as joke but whatever :p
5287577 I should probably be addressing this in later chapters, at least more so on the medical bits, its been a while since I last checked my work but I believe I have mentioned it several times that Aria is in no shape or form meant for the primary role of combat at the front, instead focusing on support work of weaponry like sniping and a preference to becoming a medic rather than, say, Cait's close range combat preference.
As for Maul and why Aria was willing to sell them out. There is a certain realization that Aria in by all means, hates science abusers, and seeing as they made maul, which was akin to her own situation(again stated in the same chapter she gives them away in), finds undo sympathy with Maul, and lets her grudge against science ponies get ahead of her better nature. You could say its one of her natural flaws, as she has, of yet, met very few(as in none) trust worthy and good scientists. That and combined with her young age... As for Maul himself, he bears ill will towards Dr.Delicious and his science ponies for making him what he is, and forcing him to be what he is. Yes, he has eaten ghouls and other ponies, but it was a diet made from circumstances, rather than one of choice (Seriously, there is only so much food in the post apocalypse, and the best source of it is meat seeing as farms and greenery are rare elsewhere besides the Everfree Forest).
If you have any more questions or things that need further elaboration in story, feel free to contact me on fimfiction or Aria's blog. I'll be sure to touch a bit more on Aria's medical stuff once the DLC chapters are finished. Been planning a deep talk between her and Grey anyway.
5287578 well, knowing that, you can be exempt from my comment, but not the others tho. unless they're joking too. sorry for misunderstanding, bud.
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i actually didn't play nv because 3d is ugly comparing to 2d from f1 and 2, and i way more prefer to play fonline than bethecrap productions :p they sadly are good only in making good wide maps but rest is very low sadly
but still it was supposed to be joke xd
5286716 Nope! I do not have a system to play that game. Knew someone who had a xbox 360 and a fallout 3 though. So I at least know some about fallout games...But no Las Vegas.
5291187 its really good. its available on pc too, if you match the specs. i advise getting it. the dlc ties well into the base game, essentially just adding a whole mouthful of nice stuff to an offhand comment or two out of the base game.
5291491 if you end up getting the DLC for NV, I recommend Old world blues first, it was one of my favorite DLCS apart from Lonesome road, but Lonesome Road really only ties in the other 3 DLCS together so it should be played last. After Old world blues, I'd recommend going after the Sierra Madre then the Burned Man before ending it with lonesome road. A lot of dialog in it only makes sense once that is done.
I have yet to play fallout 1 or 2, but I plan on as soon as I can spare the cash. Though I'm not much a fan for TBS type games unless they're Xcom like.
5291546 i have all of them. i was recommending the game to somepony else.
doctor who reference at the end?
Aria, I'd start running. Now.
5292618 well I think but its in the game to