FOE story mixed with FO4, meet the Sole Survivor of Stable 111 Fast Times, a colt from before the great war who's spent 90% of the time since in cryo sleep. But something goes wrong on his last time in the freezer...
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Well, that escalated quickly. Though I think that he had a Perfectly reasonable reaction, really. Everyone wants to stop the institute, but killing innocent ponies to try and find a way to detect them, no. Just no. You throw out morals like this town did, and you’re no better than the ones your fighting. The railroad gets it, these idiots do not.
Also, princess Glitter. Yay
Keep up the good work
I am so tempted for a new faction to pop up, let us just say the name will say it all... Disciples of the Shroud.
Jesus. I really shouldn't have binge read this story. Now I gotta wait for the next chapter. Feelsbadman.
Damn. That was...just...damn... And I thought things couldn't get worse. Great chapter, things are getting crazy now. Let's have some fun.
Ouch.
Great chapter.
Also,
Is that a reference to Project Horizons - Speak ?
Had to read through the other comments for a bit to calm down...... Another commentor said your writing like P.H. and mentioned Somber...and I have to disagree. Somber wishes he could write like this! The scenes are immersive , the emotional play is not just a bucket of angst , the emotion is deep and hard hitting from both happy and sad. Battle sequences are not adolescent 40K visceral muck, you may gore at times, but only as much as needed. Bringing us to this latest sequence of events. I have not had to calm myself down so that I could write a comment about a story in a long time. (IT'S HARD TO WRITE WITH THE TABLET SHAKING! ) You have a story here that surpasses P.H. and throws water on its ashes! (I would have used my old military lingo about stomping , burning, whizzing on ashes...but we are in gentler company here ....hehehe) Keep doing what you're doing! IT WORKS!
What the hell Shroud? You were running things for like, what, a week while Fast was recovering and you never thought of making a little trip up to Trinity Tower? Now Miles has beaten you there and who knows what he's got up to. For shame sir, for shame!
Glad Glitter is still kicking. I just hope the Institute doesn't get their evil clutches on her, or she probably will be reformatted like all the other rouge synths they catch.
There's a song that makes me think about Fast and the Shroud...
https://youtu.be/_5PukT_TEKQ
The twists...oh the twists. Enjoying the story. Can't wait for more.
Wow!!! This is a totally awesome read. What a smooth, engaging, entrancing style your writing has. I started reading this a few days ago and couldn't put it down for 7 hours straight. Three days later and I am at 8% read.
this was an amazing chapter. all the twists, the emotion, it makes this story so... immersive!!!!
Ho boy this is getting good but now I must wait, shiiiiiit.
The wait for the next chapter is killing me...
Railroad
Is my prediction, although it's probably already been answered in the new chapters posted since I was last reading this story.
Ooooorrrr this chspter
Saw that coming but surprised it was Fast and not the Shroud. And I guess this is Fast's falling just like Littlepip. The Shroud is definitely not helping.
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A reaction like Starlord from Infinity War. Although I guess Quill's lead to much more death. But it couldn't go any other way (I personally think he gets too much crap for that)
But I agree with you on that.
This is the best story ever, Amiright, or amiright?
I’m emotionally invested in this story, I’m actually feeling emotion here. Me and feeling emotion from stories go together about as well as ketchup and ice cream. I simply don’t really get emotion, but my favorite stories, Tangled Up In Blues, this, and the original Fallout: Equestria defy that idea.
Also, don’t take this the wrong way, but I love Fast fighting with himself and talking himself down. This is really unusual, as I really hate it when heroes do the right thing and yet they still talk themselves down. LittlePip is my least favorite character in FO:E because of that. However, the key note in that statement is that I hate it when heroes do the right thing and talk themselves down for it. While technically Fast’s reactions are justified, they are really over-the-top and unnecessary. He did not have to kill an entire town because they insulted his daughter. He isn’t doing the best things, and I love that moral fiber he has where he keeps fighting with himself over it. This also has the added bonus of showing him slowly going off the rails and making it completely clear that he isn’t in control while doing these heinous acts.