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ObeyBunny


The ship plummeted, seriously upsetting a ‘V’ of migrating birds that exploded and fried on the burning surface of the hull.

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  • Favourites 37 stories - 17 unread chapters My brain or heart say "YES!"
    Created by ObeyBunny
    - October, 2014
Found 31 stories in 57ms

Total Words: 1,856,557
Estimated Reading: 5 days

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  • Favourites 37 stories - 17 unread chapters My brain or heart say "YES!"


  • First contact 21 stories - 91 unread chapters Stories featuring first contact, meeting of cultures, language barrier


  • Lyra stories 5 stories - 6 unread chapters Stories featuring Lyra


  • Total shit 17 stories These stories are disagreeable in some fundamental way. Mary Sue's, bad spelling, bad pacing, boring, lack of conflict, or offensive.


  • Somber and dark 7 stories - 3 unread chapters Enjoyable without the "Fun" part


  • Under judgement 18 stories I've heard about your story. I'm in the process of reading it.


  • Action packed 16 stories - 8 unread chapters Not necessarily all gun battles and blood, but definitely more than people sitting in a room and talking. Also, I like your story.


  • Genius storytelling 13 stories - 7 unread chapters The events of your story play out brilliantly. Your story naturally progresses to phenomenal events. Word choice: brilliant. Characters: charismatic and believable. Your gimmicks and devices: unique. I LOVE your story.


  • Funny 6 stories - 2 unread chapters Not necessarily a comedy, but still humorous. Also, I like your story.


  • Pretty Good and Worth Studying 24 stories You have good or interesting wordplay, plot points, worldbuilding,


  • Strong Begining 4 stories Exelent begining, but then something got off track. Sagging middles, dropped subplots, characters become mary sues, story became overly complicated, characters don't grow, etc.

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The Canterlot Caverns are a strange and enigmatic place, untouched and forgotten by pony-kind for centuries. So when a strange metal object is unearthed in their depths, it's up to Twilight Sparkle and Lyra Heartstrings to discover the many secrets it holds.

Together, the two of them will have to do their best to understand the remnants of an ancient civilization, and decipher what remains of Those Who Came Before.


The cover-image is a cleverly edited stock image, which was modified by the stupendous Corvo.
Proofreading was performed by the equally fantastical writers:
Timetraveling Pony (Who started as a proofreader when Cloud was writing this. Hats off to him for being dedicated and staying on as a proofreader for me.)
DustyPwny
Tidal
Superluminous
Night Spark
PhiliChez

And a special Thank You goes to The Sentient Cloud for allowing me the honor of continuing this great story after he retired from writing fimfictions.

As it turns out, this story is eerily similar to Lyra Heartstrings and the Hand of Man. Due to their similarity, I feel that it would be appropriate to give said story a mention.

Chapters (4)