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Comma Typer


Horse-words writer believing in the Savior and Lord Jesus Christ, creatively crafting stories in imitation of a creatively crafting God. Consider this: Are you sure you're going to Heaven?

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Signal Boost: "Grounded" by KorenCZ11 · 1:48am Aug 20th, 2020

I've tangoed with KorenCZ11 before on Far From the Tree, and I've now double-tangoed with him on Grounded.

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Rainbow Dash dreams of a foal in the sky, one she can never quite seem to make out. She always recognizes his eyes though as they're just like hers. Just who is he? And why does Rainbow feel like she knows him?
KorenCZ11 · 30k words  ·  45  2 · 1.9k views

Proofreading/editing this one was a different experience compared to Far From the Tree. For one, this one's a darker, grittier tale than the last one; for another, I think I'm improving as a pre-reader/proofreader/editor/what-have-you-at-this-point; still another, it's a refreshing take to proofread a story from the mother's P.O.V. after the last story having a father as the main character.

Other than that, I don't have much to say that wouldn't spoil the story. If you like a set-in-the-near-future Rainbow Dash-centric dramatic tragedy (topped with a Soarin/Rainbow Dash family), then this one will take the cake for you.

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