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Apr
4th
2020

Vote Count · 1:23pm Apr 4th, 2020

WARNING!!! DO NOT READ THIS IF YOU DO NOT WAN'T TO KNOW ANYTHING ABOUT THE SEQUEL!!!!

Okay, people have voted!

Please note that I did not count when people said transition into some other idea, but I did put down when they said they voted for A and B.

Results!

1#: 3 Votes.

2#: 1 Vote.

3#: 6 Votes.

4#: 3 Votes.

5#: 9 Votes.

Last Warning for possible spoilers!

I must admit, I did not count on so many votes for option 5.

So to all of you, I leave with another say in this matter.

Should he

1#: Arrive as an alicorn already?

Or.

2#: Should he ascend after doing something heroic?

I also would like to say my thanks to everyone who has partaken in the debate in the comment section. It was polite and respectful, and you guys had many neat ideas. Really guys, thank you so much. :twilightsmile:

I would really love to see you guys keep sharing ideas and your thoughts, because it is my goal to keep the momentum going on this story and keep making it better. :eeyup:

Since option 3 was in second place, here is an idea for you.

3+5: Daniel has arrived in Equestria (As an alicorn, or a normal pony for now?) But not in the place he counted on.. He has no idea where he is, or where to go. So he needs to find his way to Ponyville, to reunite with his friends and lovers. But changing from human to a pony is hard, and it is not as easy as it looks.. So not only dealing with being lost, he also deals with having to get used to being a pony. What dangers and adventures lies ahead for Daniel? We will have to wait and see.

What do you guys think?

Also, what sort of story should it be, should it be the journey itself that is the obstacle he has to overcome. Meeting perhaps one or two traveling companions?

Or, should we have a villain? Is so, what kind of villain? And why would he peruse Daniel? Maybe because of the hidden potential in humans?

At any rate, thank you for reading this long blog, and thank you again for taking your time. Hope you keep enjoying the story, and will enjoy the sequel when it is released. :pinkiehappy:

Comments ( 28 )

I vote 1 plus the 3+5
Ok Daniel has come to Equestria as an alicorn and he wants to know why. Why him of a ll people. Then on his journey he finds pieces of the answer, then when he reaches Ponyville he come to understand why he became an alicorn.

Let me know if this is a good suggestion or not

I think that it should be both. Evil alicorn twin who is the villain trying to get the girls for himself.

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5235534
Hmmm, maybe the reason he is an alicorn is because he has, ahem, mated , with all the elements of harmony, so he is sort of a guardian. That's why the evil Alicorn could be wanting the girls, to gain the power that lies buried within Daniel now?

2 plus 3+5

Go for 1 and 3+5. That would be interesting:pinkiehappy:
I don't know what kind of story the sequel would be, but if there is an enemy after Daniel, maybe that's because human have endless potential. The limit is only their imagination and if they want to work hard enough to realize it.
Another suggestion, try to make the story M rated. That way, you can make the story more flexible, colourful and interesting since there are so many possibilities without being limited because it's T rated.
Or maybe you can make a separate story about their *ahem* activity.:pinkiehappy::raritywink:
What do you think?

I had to flip a coins and my vote goes to 2, as for the 3+5 thing, i'm indifferent

#2 would do well since he is human.

5235536
I was just thinking that since the evil alicorn would come from him that they both have the same amount of feelings for the girls as each other.

5235569
Hmm, guess it be like Nightmare Moon and Daybreaker, only his alternative self splits away from him when he comes to Equestria.

5235583
That's exactly what I was thinking.

i vote #1 and 3+5 because him being a alicorn at the start will make him a target because of how poweful he is but since he just turned into a pony he has trouble with his powers and body. this will balance out him being too op at the start and give him a reason to train his powers.

5235587
Yeah exactly what I was thinking. I do not want him to seem all powerful and OP, he may be strong, but that doesn't mean buck if he doesn't know how to take one step without tripping. :rainbowlaugh:

Do 3+5 with a twist: he has amencia, he no idea where he is, why he's in Equestria, or why he knows the Mane 6 so well!

I vote #2 and 3+5 makes it mean something also I believe the journey is the destination no villain is needed. Or more preferable (for me anyway) just do away if the journey and have him meet them amnesiac or not and have something in the course of the romance cause him to ascend.

2 and 3+5
And just so you know I've actually put the stories I had been reading on hold to begin reading this one. And its a great story so far and I'm glad I started reading it. Keep up the good work.

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I'm glad you like it, and thank you for the corrections, some of them I did not even notice before now. ^^

I honestly like AstralFlare42's idea. It works well. I might not be the biggest fan of him starting as an alicorn, but with him not having any idea how to control it his newly acquired powers are basically worthless. Of course now the question is what he would be the alicorn of.

#2 and I like the option 3 and 5 combined plot

5235784
Yeah no problem
If you want i can continue if I see any. What I'll do is just put it in a quote and strikeout the mistake and put the correction in italics

5235569
It's probably just me, but I'm getting persona 4 déjà vu from your comment.

5236037
I only know about persona 5.

Also it would be a great reveal that the evil alicorn had a copy of his memories and the process causes David to lose his memories.

5236042
So male version of Xion, but if he did gradually lose his memory, he must be already at Ponyville. If he's not, it won't make sense for the story.

5236050
Just what I was thinking. Even though I don't know who you are talking about.

5236108
She's a character from Kingdom Hearts series.

5236126
Never played those games. Watched them on YouTube. Still in the middle of the second one. The one before Kingdom Hearts II.

i think a villain sould be like dimentio or jevil. they think they are right using chaos to make everything better but causing insanity and harm for others.

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