Updates, and a surprise

The next chapter is called The Sun Sets. No, Sunset Shimmer won't return in this. And no, I never intended her to. She went out as a sacrifice for Twilight, and it messed her up to the lengths you'll see in this chapter. Twilight talks to Tempest, Pinkie Pie will provide a bit of obvious fanservice, and Marshal Malice...well, Marshal Malice...He'll...change.

And now, for that surprise.

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More. That's it.

Hey, you. You're finally awake. Stepped right into that Imperial ambush. Same as us, and that thief over there.

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[Beau_Dodson]

I've heard about you and your honeyed words.

[BradyBunch]

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Thanks. I didn't know I had a good reputation. Or a reputation at all, tbh.

[Jade Dawn]

Marshal Malice...well, Marshal Malice...He'll...change.

*grabs popcorn* Let the interesting plot twists begin...

EDIT: I scrolled to the bottom.

You diseased maniac.

[BradyBunch]

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I can change your mind with a bottle of Skooma. The good stuff, the imported kind...just one more time...

[BradyBunch]

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A dragon attacked. I barely made it out alive.

[Beau_Dodson]

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I see… and you saw this dragon with your own eyes?

[BradyBunch]

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Yes, I had a good view of it while I was about to be beheaded.

[Beau_Dodson]

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I see. You're certainly… forthright about your criminal past. But, it's none of my concern who the Imperials want to execute… especially now. What I want to know is, what exactly happened at Helgen.

[BradyBunch]

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The dragon attacked Helgen. And last I saw, it was heading this way.

[Beau_Dodson]

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By Ysmir, Ireleth was right!

[Amusementist]

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God dammit.

[Beau_Dodson]

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Did you catch the reference, though?

[Beau_Dodson]

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What to you say, Aventius? Should we trust in the strength of our walls, against a dragon?

[Amusementist]

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Racks Sword

[Final fantasy forever]

We'll drive out the Empire from this land that we own