Is muh birthmass :3 ... Oh god, I'm getting old T.T · 5:56pm May 17th, 2019
Oh god, I'm nearly 3 decades old! In 8 more years I'll be as old as my mom was when I was born
If you'd like to help a girl feel better about the slow inevitable march towards looking ugly, being unable to preform most physical activities, loosing much of your ability to feel happy and imagine things, and other horrible slow decaying of the body, mind, and soul that is aging, woudl you mind answering these questions for me? Feel free to answer one, several, or all. Just let me know which one(s) you're answering if not all of them, okay?
Relating to my current story:
Who is your favorite character and why?
- What have they done/do which you really enjoy?
- Is there anything you'd like to see them do/happen to them?
- What was your favorite moment in the story so far?
- What is something you would like to see in the story?
- Is there a particular thing you're expecting to happen?
Relating to anything I have ever written:
What is your favorite story, and why?
- Is it your favorite genera? If not, why?
- Did you like the levels of action vs drama? Would you have changed anything?
What was your favorite worldbuilding/setting elements I have made, and why?
- Is there anything you'd have changed about it?
- Would you like to see similar stuff in other stories of mine?
- Do you like the work I do in general?
Who is your favorite character and why?
- What have they done/do which you really enjoy?
- Is there anything you'd like to see them do/happen to them?
- What was your favorite moment in the story?
- What is a theme, plot device, narrative structure, etc, you especially enjoyed seeing?
- Is there a particular thing you'd like to see me do in other stories?
This is the kind of stuff I hope to see in comments but never really get much of (I would also enjoy getting more comments along the lines of: "Thank you for spending 12 hours working to entertain me again this week."). It's sort of important information for me to know so I can better entertain you going forwards.
Also people telling me this kind of stuff is how I know that I matter, have purpose, a reason to exist, etc...
My favorite character is Gears. Just purely because the way your write her, she feels alive. More alive than most characters I’ve read about on this site. My favorite moment in Star Drop is everything! This isn’t a joke, your story is a lot better than some of the other Fanfics. Most drop a self insert character into the middle of Pips story and change it in such a way to suit themselves that it ruins the original story. Or are just plain bad. Yours is well written, the characters are balanced (well not in Speeds case but..), and the plot isn’t just drop kicked into your face. What I’m expecting to happen is the rest of Gales palls show up, or Gears puts Feature to Gales plot hole and pulls the trigger to revenge Roll. And my favorite thing you do is build on what is already there. You are very good at filling in plot holes, and making sure they never happen in the first place.
All in all, your my favorite writer on this site Meep!
I'm a bit behind in this story. Busy with work and life.
Anyway wanted to say Happy Birthday! If I could give you a gift it would be a ticket to the MLP world.
I'll tell you my thoughts when I'm done working tonight.
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May I print out this comment and stick it to my fanmail wall? That realy made my day and I woke up pritty depressed.
She's not as tough as you think. Wait till there's a fight with people who are not scrubs. *taps outline a few chapters down the road...*
While Gears does have some elements in common with me (After all, high-functioning autistic logic and robot logic have some overlap), I can agree say she's not a self insert. I wanted to avoid that at all costs... kkat deserves better than that. I want to make a good story that's a true sequel in tone, themes, and narrative. I want to see friendship continue to fix the wasteland.
I also wanted to see some elements of the
betterolder Fallout games get used in Fallout Equestria. I mean come on! The original dosn't even have an analogue to best villein! Who'se the best villein? Why it's-- ME, FRANK HORRIGAN, THAT'S WHO! UNITED STATES SECRET SERVICE! YOU AIN'T GOING NOWHERE FROM HERE.(I like how spellcheck wants to change Horrigan to horrifying :3 I mean come on! That voice :3)
Then there's also stuff like the Calculator, BOMB-1, the Midwest Botherhood... kkat's never played a Classic Fallout game. Said so in an interview. She can't wrap her head around early 90's CRPG controls and UI... To be fair, I can't hold that against her XD But, as someone with the power of Old, I played them all. I want to use them in the same way she did (with a bit better job on the mixing and melding) to make a nice new story :3
Congratulations on completeing another solar orbit. Hope you keep collecting them.
I keep forgetting things and have a sinus infection.
I cant write storys so I cant really comment on things, Or try not to got totally over the top. I mean, I was thinking of a vaccuum energy collapse Genesis Laser before I reached Highschool. As for what I wanted to achive eventually with the ZX spectrum in the early 80s, over years of evolution to come, the closts currently would be Dream Machine on PS4/5. Except thats not Elite classic procedural. Or PCGen filled with entire worlds of active lifeforms.
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You may indeed, as long as you DM me a picture of it pinned to your wall Meep! If you can’t or don’t want to that is fine as well.
Favorite character, easily Whirling Gears. She ain't no robot, for sure! She's a pony (zebra, if you want to pick nits) in a mechanical body. This is the only story of yours I have read so far, but I'll get to the others soon enough.
Please do not feel bad when I say you are not my favorite writer. You are the newest (to me, at least) that made it to the top of the rankings. The other two I have simply known longer.
Happy birthday, you young whippersnapper! Many HAPPY returns of the day!
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I would be amazingly surprised if I were. I mean, Brian Jacques. Brian Sanderson. R.A. Salvadore. Timothy Zahn. These people exist.
I am glad you like this story though!
Happy Birthmass! Just think, soon you'll be able to yell at kids to get off of your lawn, and tell "in my day..." stories when someone younger than you complains or does stupid shit .
5060046 I allready can ><
Back in my day, video games were made to tell a story and sold as a single package you were meant to enjoy for months or more. And another thing! There were genre other than shooter and shooter wearing a dead RPG's skin. We had CRPGs, RTSs, Simulators, none of these twitch-reflex fests and battle royal nonsense, and that's the way we liked it! What's more, back in my day, EA was actually **GOOD**!
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Oh and no offense just helping it's genre and not genera
5060071 Thanks! That word always confuses me.
Well... Urrrmm happy Birthday (oh dear), I hope you injoy today and can I eventually get to those questions
Well happy birthday!
So far I'd say that my favorite character is Gears, she has this kind of earnestness to her that is so compelling. In a lot of characters it might come across as naiveté, an out-of-place Pollyanna, but you've balanced Gears very well between her enthusiasm for life and love of unreasonably large explosions.
As for what I'd like to see happen, for a bit of fun I'd like to see her get to direct a fixed emplacement of summat, like a howitzer, just to show off what she can really do. Story-wise, I'd like to see her have a talk with however many people are living in her head, get some cards on tables.
On a related note, my favorite moment was definitely her finding that grenade launcher, and all subsequent bits pertaining to that. Mares love cannons.
As far as expectations go, I note that most of the mane six have made an appearance in one fashion or another. I think I know how Twilight might be given a voice, and Pinkie was so over the moon on foresight-boosting drugs that she could hold a conversation with someone reviewing her archived memories. But I really would be fascinated to see how Rarity makes an appearance.
As far as favorite stories go, just to avoid repeating myself I'll disqualify Star drop. I really like Dash to the Stars, that far-future sci-fi romp is just fun. I do very much enjoy sci-fi, though really I'll read anything so long as it's well-written. As to what I'd change, well I just wish it was a little longer. I'd have liked to see a little more of the side character's perspectives, perhaps some bits about Celestia poking her nose into ODIN.
For favorite character, the Chernin. like, the whole thing of Chernin. I loved the idea of those mech-suited slavs from the moment that a hard bass blaring taxi dropped into Equestria's atmosphere. And what I want to see more than anything else is for them to rediscover their long lost origins, and the smol ponies.
So it should come as no surprise that my favorite moment was the trip to Chern. The ponies freaking out about the storm of unstable magic, and uncle Boris just going "is fine, no worries!"
If I didn't I wouldn't be here.
5060078 Thank you! I'm glad you find Gears just silly enough to be endearing ^^ That's exactly what I was going for with her character and I am happy to have gotten it right at least by one person's point of view.
I can garente you that at some point you'll get to see what she can really do when given full reign over something.
Hummm. Rarity... Yes that would be a bit of a trick, wouldn't it?
Happy birthday, Meep!
Ok, in order: My favourite character in Star Drop is probably Gears, difficult to choose though since all your characters are so good! Including the canon ones who've changed like "Wander". The thing I enjoy seeing with Gears is her mix of pony/robot/machine spirit thinking and reactions, as I said before. Not sure about what I'd like to see her do, other than herald in a new proper rebuilding of society. Particular thing... Pip and/or Tia getting a Robobrain Mark III upgrade. Maybe Wander joining Gears in Lith.
For a favourite story overall, not really sure, I'm bad at deciding that - plus most are in the same continuity, so they're all the same big story. In other words I like them all? I think my favourite genre is moreso any story with good worldbuilding, which you have quite a lotof. I think my favourite setting element is the Phoenix, and how it's a Changeling Hive. Rather epic, it's perfect the way it is. And of course I enjoy the work you do, it pretty much matches exactly the sorts of things I'm interested in :)
The particular elements I like from your stories are changelings, gratuitous cool technology, and from some of the earlier ones TFs and herminess. So more of that.
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Well that's an easy wish to fufill :3
Fun fact, Pheonix is what it is because I was originally going to do a fanfic of Legacy where a bunch of Changebugs found yet another burred Bolo and were all " D; Nuuuu! Hurt machine!" and fixed it up because that's what changelings do. Steal love and fix/build advanced technology. (There would have been a scene where Twilight passes out from a Changebug stealth feeding on her, then woke up to find an apologize note and a mini particle accelerator as an apology. The accelerator woudl have been made by scrapping random things from her house.)
There should be one or two in the later bits of this story :3
Oh man, you have no idea >:3 Rainbow does though. Kinda.
Yeah about that... Think the fandom is old enough now for the creepy people to have moved on to something else so I can include characters of a sex I am actually attracted to without them asking I insert scenes of underage cannibalistic necrophilia? Because like... I enjoyed that.
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Gears because robozeeb. Got upgrades. Fluff w/ her and Wander.
Got upgrades.
The eventual revelation that dead dad is same dad as head dad.
That again.
Livegiver. Biomancy cool. I dunno. Yes. No.
Clover, her book, Diamond Hive, Biomancy. No. Yes. Yes.
Dusk. Is Death. Defeat of the Big Man.
The discovery of new weather powers.
I don't know how words work.
Be a happy Meepu doin a write instead of a stress.
Wander and Gear is my fav.
One of the stories I like is 'So you want to be a princess'
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That is the one story that I did as a commission. I wish I was given better direction on what they wanted... I'm glad you liked it in spite of the mess it is XD
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Sorry I couldn't give more answers to the questions. I got real tired returning from work and I need to catch some z's
Happy birf-a-versary!
...you're not old. You're a whippersnapper. I'm ancient at a whole half a decade more, so you have to take what I say as the truth. Respect your elders, lassie!
Relating to my current story:
Who is your favorite character and why?
I'm gonna go with Wander, because in spite of Gears' "clueless rube from the sticks" charm pushing all the traditional farmboy/girl-to-hero trope buttons, just the idea of an eternal music pone wandering the wasteland trying to help here and there to make up for their mistakes--and secretly being a hero and inspiration to the ruler of an entire faction!--is just epic.
What have they done/do which you really enjoy?
I think I covered that already.
Is there anything you'd like to see them do/happen to them?
Some kind of happy ending/resolution that ends with ponies in general knowing who she is and what she did?
What was your favorite moment in the story so far?
That's a toughie. The favorite recently would be Fluttershy giving a certain skittle-pone a widely overheard verbal working-over, though?
What is something you would like to see in the story?
I think I mentioned what I hope to see on Discord a while back. And I won't spoil it for anyone in case it happens. Just that it involves regeneration. And a flappy pony of some sort. That isn't Rainbow Dash.
Is there a particular thing you're expecting to happen?
Lil Pip, Homage, Wander, Speed, Rainbow--and maybe Fluttershy if Rainbow can get over how "old" she is--all getting together for ah... "Stripey-pony rides" shall we call it?
Relating to anything I have ever written:
What is your favorite story, and why?
That I've read so far? I know how you feel about it, but "So you want to be a Princess?" It caught my eye immediately, being a riff on a classic title I'd read when I was a smol ape-creature in bygone days of yore. Although Star Drop is nipping at its hind-hooves and I haven't gone through your entire catalogue yet because you put me in the mood to go read more Fallout: Equestria spinoffs...
So that may change when I do get to them!
Is it your favorite genera? If not, why?
My favorite genre flips back and forth between sci-fi and fantasy based on what I'm reading/have read recently. And keeps being overridden by "anything with pones" at random moments...
So I guess it is at random moments?
Do you like the work I do in general?
Yes.
Is there a particular thing you'd like to see me do in other stories?
Well, yeah, maybe, I guess? But I doubt anybody else wants a random cameo from a random blue pegasus with delusions of kinda-sorta adequacy.
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EA...
You know, I too recall a time when EA wasn't a synonym for money-gouging shitshow. A time when EA's product was so damned good, that you could play a game from a genre that you otherwise didn't even like, and have fun with it; I played EA's NCAA and Madden combo for a couple of years and I can't stand football. But EA did such an amazing job--especially on the linked career mode--that I basically played them like anything but football games.
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Someday, when you've completed Star Drop to your entire satisfaction and are casting about for something new to write, I would be very interested to see your take on a Bolo fic.
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I second this interest in bolo
Oh an 'Dash to the Stars' is also good
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oohh...so many good ones to choose from...
Most of those "which is your favorite" have the same problem. So many good ones!
I know Gears has been pretty cute so far, Dusk can do excellent deadpan snark when she needs to...
Well, so far, your fallout equestria story has had a pretty good balance of those.
Yes.
Ooooh....my mind is SO FULL OF HALF BAKED CRAZY IDEAS.
They're all kinda jammed in the doorway, like the three stooges.
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BWAHAHAHHA!
Happy Birthday!
I would have to think and read a bit more, but Wander is my favorite character at this point. I love your world-building, but I feel like it clashes with your other characters, and with the story.
5061088 May I ask how my worldbuilding clashes with the narrative?
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The most recent case is this:
This has nothing to do with the world at large, only the story. It is pretty good for the story, but came out of nowhere world wise.
I have the same issue with The Queen is Dead, the world was distracting from the interesting story, and characters.