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Ashfur


Constantly distracted by shenanigans. Empowered by comments/messages. Exists as something between utter trash and the alicorn of comedy.

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  • 144 weeks
    Reboot(s) incoming.

    You know what? I think I'm ready to repopen some old stories. Specifically, Error Code: FiO, Tale of a Comet: White Light, and Half past ten.

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  • 144 weeks
    Audience participation time!

    I'm writing an intermission chapter before the next big story arc of potion shop. It's titled "Arca gets on a train and nothing interesting happens, I swear."

    What MLP character should Arca encounter on the train? And why that character in particular?

    No wrong answers.

    18 comments · 291 views
  • 146 weeks
    Phoenixfur (I'm back! Ask me stuff?)

    Yeah, I'm back. And honestly I could use a bit of a soundboard to get my creativity flowing at max again. So if you have any questions for me, ask away! I can also try to answer in-character for any of my characters from prank war or the potion shop.

    22 comments · 334 views
  • 221 weeks
    Writing trouble

    I'm gonna be honest. These last two months have been super tough for me. Not asking for pity or anything, but I've had to put my dog down and my Grandfather's been in and out of ICU for a while now with brain surgeries.

    Mentally, I'm just exhausted.

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    9 comments · 461 views
  • 229 weeks
    Ashfur crashes the barcast!

    For those of you who are insane enough to enjoy what I write and happen to watch the barcast podcast weekly, good* news! I'm the guest this week!

    So hop on over to the Questions thread to ask me anything you want to hear me talk about. Hope to see you all there!

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24th
2019

Quick question · 4:57pm Mar 24th, 2019

Hey everyone! Sorry I've been taking so long on updates (it was a long week at work and I needed sleep) but now... it's finally time for the Trade exchange arc in potion shop. Given the length of the story so far, it's time to consider marking it complete and starting a direct sequel/continuation so the original doesn't seem too long for new readers.

Thoughts? Should I keep potion shop as one long story, or should I just continue in (working title) Potions, Inc.?

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Too me The potion shop has always felt like a series of short stories so i would say just make it one long story, if it had some overarching story then maybe start thinking about a sequel.

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Agreed. I also love the Prank War crossovers.

I think that if you've any substantial stories in mind they should be their own thing. Overburdening a story by letting it go on for too long is a problem I've seen before, you've got to know when to divide up your stories.

I dont care. I'm the one that will sit down with an all in one copy of Lord of the Rings and go cover to cover, so I'm probably not the one to ask on that.

I would say make it one but I don't really care either way

I don't mind, I do agree with the person that said you should never let stories get too long. There's a reason I haven't read Time Loops.

As long as the universe continues, I’m good with either.
Sorry, I know that wasn’t very helpful.

this is just what would do in this situation

if you're going to keep the story pretty much the same as it always has without wrapping up all loose ends(such as the Duck Finally dies) then i see no reason for you to make a sequel. however, if it was going to be something like he Celestia sees the damage Arca has done and decides to have him move to another town like i don't know ponyville for example or any other change to the stories recipe then i would say yeah you should make it into a sequel. just note the final chapter should be at the very least satisfying

while I'll admit that it's getting pretty long I don't really see a point for that alone to be a reason to cut it off there and make a sequel

though I suppose I could why the amount of chapter could be intimidating for newer readers... since ive found chapter with a 100 or so of them

While the chapter count is a little up there, honestly the overall story isnt that long. And as others have said each chapter is basically an easilly digestible short story. So personally i would keep it one story unless something in the story fundamentally changes.

Hey, as long as yer shittin' out chapters for me to dig through to find the story within and then fix, I'm bueno! :pinkiehappy:

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