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BronyWriter


I write pony words. Millions of them. Some people actually think they might be worth reading. I am very thankful for that. Also, I have a Patreon now?

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  • 1 week
    So last week...

    Child #4 was born. One Mr. Robert Finnick "Finn."

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  • 9 weeks
    So I asked Gemini AI...

    To summarize the story TD the Alicorn Princess. The result I got was... interesting.

    1. Fimfiction story: This story involves Peter Westmoore, a responsible college student, who is transported to the magical land of Equis and transformed into an alicorn princess named TD. He faces challenges adapting to his new life and ruling his nation.

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    13 comments · 539 views
  • 19 weeks
    So...

    As many of you well know, I'm a father of three. A four-year-old, a two-year-old, and a one-year-old. It's pretty great. Can be difficult, but overall a pretty big blessing. How my wife takes care of three kids five days a week is beyond me, as I have a hard time taking care of them two days a week when my wife goes off to work.

    So yeah...

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  • 31 weeks
    Editing help

    Yes, I'm calling out for editors again. I want to submit a story to the Cozy Glow contest, and I want to make sure that the story I just wrote for it is good, or "wow, that's a jumbled mess of ideas, far too mean, and the ending is terrible."

    Let me know if you'd like to help. Any extra eyes would be highly appreciated.

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  • 38 weeks
    I totally forgot

    To mark this as a "sequel" to the original story. So, if you're in the mood for more TD/Comet...

    https://www.fimfiction.net/story/515715/the-eventual-daughter-of-a-non-brony

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Aug
27th
2018

Secret Life of Rarity print book · 9:40pm Aug 27th, 2018

I want to do this. After doing TD the Alicorn Princess, I want to actually get The Secret Life of Rarity good enough for a print copy, and then the other two, because why not? People have been asking for them for years.

So, I need editors. Lots of them. The story is 90% of the way there, but the prose, tech stuff, show vs tell, etc, is about 50-60% of where I want it to be. That goes for Secret, Public, Blossom, Word. Getting all 4 ready for print would rock.

So if you want to help, I'd be happy to have you aboard! I want these books to be as perfect as I can get them.

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Comments ( 10 )

If I had more bits, I would be throwing them at you so hard...

I am willing to help with editing. Grammar, spelling, and punctuation are my strong points when it comes to editing.
Also, WANT!!!

Ohhhh I read the whole series I believe! Absolutely loved it! would definitely buy them once I can!

You know... I have not yet read Word...
I need to correct that

I dabble a bit in criticism, so I can nitpick all the minor stuff out and help with the editing! Throw a link whenever you have the docs ready!

I’ll join the list of volunteers as well. I also have a question about SLOR- In one of the chapters of the original, a big deal is made about her buying a set of meat-cutting knives from Gryphons. Does that mean everything before that point has been done with the equivalent of butter knives?

I find myself with massive amounts of time to dedicate to a project and a strong desire to assist with this one. Such skills can be dedicated to this as the supreme in nitpicking at details, a sometimes obsessive need with regards to grammar and a knowledge of knives that has gotten me a few odd looks over the years.

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