Do you guys have any Idea? · 12:29pm Sep 7th, 2017
Just a quick question regarding the continuation for "A canterlot for a Unicorn"
How would you all image the next chapter? What would be its plot and title?
I am a bit of a wall here, I have two scenarios, one where Alex finally meets with Brass uncle, that traditional and pro-elite ass hat like all the other nobles, Or the second scenario where Alex, alone with brass and Olivia go visit there family business in downtown Canterlot while also still meeting up with Brass uncle but in a more secrete way.
In both scenarios though both Camellia and Octavia are away for Music practice which means they are not features in the next chapter.
So what do you guys think? Or if you have better plot ideas let me know. I am currently working on these two scenarios but again if you all have better ideas, I might use those.
I'm loving the story so far, and I'll be honest I've been waiting for the meeting between the elitest unicorn, who hates Octy, and Alex.
As such I don't really mind how you do it, or what happens, but if you're looking for advice the meeting should probably be at the shop, lots of unknowns that Alex can unintentionally (or in Alex's case maybe intentionally once he finds out why he was adopted in the first place) use to cause trouble for the uncle.
I want him to destroy some racist ponies
I'll admit the latter sounds good not only will there be a confrontation with the uncle but we see the business that made them loaded
Second idea since it can have more room for interaction
both sound intresting the first one sounds like it would be funny as hell to read while te second one would give more world building
I think you should do number C and have them all head off to the pony equivalent of Sweden and gorge themselves on cheese and leave Canterlot to faze out of existence without the presence of a protagonist :3
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A lot of shenanigans can happen for a lot of ponies to see.
It'll be hilarious that he sees that their unicorn "son" is not like he wants him to be.
I would definitely like to see the second scenario.
Seeing where the family money comes from
could be very interesting.
Also will Alex ever get to use magic?
I can imagine that if he had magic he could finaly get himself a cup of sweet life giving coffee before some maid stops him again.
Just and idea.
Keep the chapters coming.
I wanna learn to play the Cello, plz do music practice for next chapter?
It'll be like that one mlp episode where Big Mac plowed the fields for 16 minutes then tried to write a letter to Celestia but realised he was illiterate.
I, personally, think the first one is betterf
I like both but I am leaning towards option 2. So my vote goes for two.
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I would agree on that one lots more potential for random things to happen for Alex while he is at his new parents shop. Fro the meeting with the uncle I think it would be best that Octavia be there too and I don't think that he would allow her to be in his sight if he can help it. I would hope that he would pushed the idea of unicorn supremacy on to Alex if only in a round about way like introducing his to one of his kiss ass young nephews to be his friend and try to subtlety try to shift his views on things only to backfire before that happens. I would also imagine that that the uncle would pressure Alex's parents to legally change his name for something that fits more in the family theme and crumble to it.
One word, shenanigans.
So long as shenanigans happens, and said shenanigans causes misfortune to befall Brass uncle.
I'm fine with either.
I really like the second plot idea - more world-building, and we still get to meet the not-so-nice uncle character that is part of the reason behind Alex's adoption by Brass and Camilla.
Even though you've said that Tavi and Camilla will not be much of a part in the next chapter due to their other activities, I would at least like to talk a little bit about what is going on with them, since it hasn't really been brought up what the two do in their spare time. That being said, I know that this is Alex's story, so I don't expect you to go too much into Camilla and Tavi.
Can't wait for the next chapter, and keep up the good work!
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i agree with you
Between the two I'd pick option one. However, I think you should do a chapter on the actual kindergarten classes unless you are planning on saving it until later.