The Sun of My Heart Review! XD · 2:26am Dec 11th, 2016
Warning This Contains Spoilers to Story, you have been Warned
Hey guys I'm back with another story review and believe me this is going to be a good one.
Today I'm reviewing The Sun of My Heart by BlueSun52
This story has the average length of 112,000 words and it was recommended to me by a friend of mine from school and I had to say that I wasn't expecting this story to be that good, I thought it was another crappy Equestria girls story that would make me cringe beyond belief, that's what I thought at first until I read the first chapter. I was immediately drawn into the story When our mane character is related to our favorite farmer Applejack from Equestria girls.
Okay our story begins with our main character Soul Writer moving into the town of Canterlot as he about to start his first day at Canterlot High School. This is where he meets Sunset Shimmer, who is gives Soul a tour of the school and that's when he develops a crush on her.
When I read the first chapter I was begging for it not to rush and thank goodness it didn't, as we meet other characters in the story. This is where this interest me the most as we meet familiar characters from other stories.
Clyde from Amor Fati by BRyeMC
Swift from The Pie in My Eye
And quite a few other characters made by many authors, but these two are the only ones I know of that are really popular and I have read personally. Any the way they interact with each other really made me laugh a lot as our story progressed. A lot of hilarity ensues as the story continues on.
One of my favorite scenes from this story was when Pinkie Pie tries to hook up Soul with Sunset after overhearing Soul's and Swift's conversation on their crushes and before I continue I just want to say Swift I feel so sorry for you that your Senpai will never notice you T-T.......Okay anyway Pinkie Pie decides to help Soul by wearing a latex suit just to spy on Sunset even though she practically knows her already, but since she's Pinkie, I'll let it slide, so everything is going fine as she's talking with Sunset until......Her suit rips from the back, showing Pinkie's polka dotted underwear and here's the best part, Swift comes around the corner to see Pinkie and passes out from blushing, before saying "There really is a God out there," 
The story had a lot of humor and romantic moments that I liked a lot, especially when Sunset and Sonata had to compete for Souls affection and I like how there's 3 specials for this story like a rule 63 special, or how Soul meets e the cruel evil Sunset Shimmer, or where Soul is with Sonata. These specials were just too funny! Anyway that's everything I liked that I've decided to tell you guys without giving too many spoilers.
(Sigh) Now for the awful criticism..... I've noticed a couple of words missing from a couple of chapters how some words were misused within the story. That's what made me cringe the most. But I wished there was more conflict within the story. Like some disagreements with Sunset and Soul's relationship or some other guys trying to steal Sunset from him. Something like that, but that may or may not be in Blue's sequel XD. But I have to say that this is a story that I would read again a couple more times and I would recommend this to all of you who are here. So if I had to scale this story I'd say ........................8.5/10
Anyway thank you all for reading this review check out BlueSun's page and my page for more stories we've done and as always I'll see you in the next blog.
Bye, bye
Thank you so much for reviewing it! I'm happy that you enjoyed the story so much and would love to read it again!
4335619 Of course it was really good, and I have high expectations for the sequel which I'll read sometime tomorrow
Nice review! Also, omg! I can't believe I'm considered popular!! I didn't get the memo!
Also, you misspelled it "Pie in my eye" lol.
4335628 Well what did you expect it was really good. I liked your guy's story.
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I can't believe I missed that, but I'm going to leave it like that so people can see the shame of my mistake:fluttershbad......Not really upset
but I'm disappointed I messed that up.