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Review #8 - Records of an Academy Disaster, How Many Princesses Does it Take · 3:59am Dec 4th, 2016

Sorry for the lateness of this review, I really need to get a better buffer.
Anyway, here they are:

Records of an Academy Disaster by Fahrenheit
How Many Princesses Does it Take by Georg

Records of an Academy Disaster by Fahrenheit
(Comedy, Slice of Life)
There are no new cadets being trained, the big annual Wonderbolts party extravaganza isn't until this weekend, and Spitfire will only be away from the Academy for three days. Fleetfoot is definitely ready for this responsibility. Except she's not. Somepony is totally getting fired.

Review
Fleetfoot is put in charge of the academy for a few days, and things go horribly awry. The academy gets set on fire, Equestria goes to war... and so on.

This is told mostly through letters, so it's pacing is rather odd; though what it does have is amazing. It has very few errors in it's text. And it seems extremely planned out to the smallest detail. All of it's tags fit as well.

Score: 8.5/10 Recommendation: Highly Recommended.

Personal Thoughts: Amazing, go and read it right now!

How Many Princesses Does it Take by Georg
(Comedy)
The sun has gone out over Equestria, sending Princess Twilight Sparkle and her friends off to Canterlot to deal with whatever new villian has caused the disaster... Thankfully it turns out to be a far smaller problem than anticipated.

Review
The sun goes out and Twilight goes to Canterlot to find out why. While there she learns that the sun is a lightbulb. Then in the second chapter a fuse breaks and, well, yeah.

This one has odd pacing, it feels to short for what it should be; though it is a good story nonetheless. It has few errors in it, which is really rather nice. It does not feel very planned out though, but it is oddly amazing because of that. It's tag most definately fits as well.

Score: 9/10 Recommendation: Highly Recommended.

Personal Thoughts: Hahahahahahaha.

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