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14th
2016

Please answer this question for me :) · 9:29pm Jul 14th, 2016

Thanks for bearing with me through all my venting. :pinkiesad2:

My workload has been marginally lightened, and I can take a small breath now. I won't guarantee that I'll stop venting, because I have a show coming up next week that will be subpar at best since we're not prepared in any way (which is why it'll be subpar at best), but I think there'll be less of it now. My account is still on hiatus, so don't expect me to write anything soon. If you haven't noticed already, Before You and Equestria Girls: Sunset Awakening are both on hiatus now. :applejackunsure:

And to give me something to look forward to while I work, I have a question for you all.

What is your favorite CoppermaneXFluttershy moment?

A little narcissistic to ask, sure, but I'm curious. What's your favorite moment between those two in any story with them, even Amorous the only sex-tag story I have :twilightsheepish:. They're the couple that got me started writing in the first place, so I'd like to know what you think of them.:yay:

It can be either a pivotal moment between them, or something simple like cuddling. Whatever moment, big or small between Coppermane and Fluttershy, let me know what your favorite moment between them is. :pinkiehappy:

Also, what do you think of the pairing? Do you like it?

Please comment letting me know what you think. All comments are greatly appreciated. Seriously, you don't know how much I love reading your comments. It shows that people actually care about my "stories". Thank you so much! :derpytongue2:

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My favorite Copppermane and Fluttershy moment has got to be when Coppermane stands up to Hoops and Score and he's become victorious and finally asks Fluttershy out to the formal. Its sweet. :twilightsmile:

I haven't read any stories with Copper Mane yet, so I can't say...

Yeah, I have to agree with Fourshadow. That moment pretty much sums up their relationship and now much Copper loves his girlfriend. And as for the pairing itself, it's pretty much one of my fave all time OC/Mane Six ones I've seen done on this site yet.

My favorite CopperShy moment is probably this one:

"So…I told you about how I was bullied in school yes? Well…it actually goes back further than that."

Fluttershy was listening intently.

"You see, I grew up in an orphanage….and…the kids that lived there…were a lot like the kids I went to school with…so it goes back further than just school."

"That's awful," Fluttershy said sympathetically.

"That's not even the worst part…" Copper said, trailing off.

Fluttershy was all ears at this point. What was so bad that it might scare her off?

"The bullies in school would always hold me down, beat me up, and taunt me just because I like magic and music, and didn't care for sports or parties. Essentially because I wasn't "normal". I just felt helpless, because other ponies would pass by without a care in the world. They didn't do anything about it. In fact…some of them even watched. Then there were some that had the audacity to cheer them on." Copper looked away with a pained expression.

"You poor thing…" Fluttershy said sympathetically. She had no idea that the bullying was that bad.

"But…everypony has a breaking point…" Copper looked away with a pained expression again, this one, more pained.

"It's okay…" Fluttershy said reassuringly, putting her hoof on his again, "I'm not going anywhere."

Copper took a deep, shaky breath, and proceeded to tell his story.

"Before I go on, I need to explain how a certain spell works."

"I'm listening to everything." Fluttershy said.

"This spell is called…catharsis. It's a spell that I vowed never to use when I first learned of it. This spell…exists only to bring harm to other ponies. It's fueled by built-up hate and anger that's been broiling and simmering inside you for a long time. Basically what it does…is that it takes…all your pent up anger and hate…and physically manifests it in front of you. The book where I read the spell says, Give your tormentors a taste of how you feel. C-Can you see where this is going?"

Fluttershy was silent for a second, but eventually pieced it together, "Did you…use the spell on them?"

Copper looked away from her, and continued. "One day, I was just in the school yard. The same guys came over to me when I was studying in the schoolyard. They walked up to me, taunting me as they usually do. Then, they took my book and dumped water all over it, completely dousing and ruining it. It was a spellbook that I've had for years, my favorite spellbook, and the one where I learned my first few spells…and it had just been ruined. Then…they held me down and beat me up again like they always do. They paused, laughing at my pain, but then…I don't know what came over me, but I just…snapped."

Here we go…the moment of truth…

"As they laughed at my suffering, I remembered reading about that spell…and I suddenly felt my mind be consumed by my pent up anger and hate. I felt all of my emotions pouring out of me, and then, my mind went blank. When I came back to my senses…I was on the ground. I apparently was tackled by the principal in an effort to stop me. I looked around…and the schoolyard was completely ravaged…with the bullies beaten up with black eyes and bleeding cuts, some completely unconscious with teachers and students trying to revive them…and all of the other students…were just…staring at me…horrified. The principal quickly escorted me inside to chew me out."

Fluttershy was shocked, "You did use the spell on them…"

Copper looked up at her, and then back down to the ground and sighed. Then he continued. "The way the teacher described it, there was an army of raging Coppermanes just relentlessly attacking the students who were picking on me. Just mercilessly attacking them, while I was shouting things like 'Not so fun when it's you is it?' and 'This is how I feel every day thanks to you.' The principal said that it only stopped when he tackled me, and I seemed to wake up. He said that…if it had gone on any longer…I probably would've killed them."

Copper was holding back tears. "I…I studied magic…to study magic…for the fun of it…for the love of magic…not to harm or…Celestia forbid…KILL anypony…"

Fluttershy was shocked. She never expected that Copper had actually been close to killing some ponies. She just couldn't see it…it just didn't seem in his nature…but it had happened…and Copper only felt one thing. Regret.

"W-What happened after that?" Fluttershy said, urging him to continue.

Copper took another shaky, deep breath, and continued. "The only reason I wasn't expelled was because my teachers were all vouching for me, claiming that they saw the bullies provoke me, and that I had always been an exemplary student. I got suspended for a week, but honestly…I almost wish I was expelled…because…it was never the same in school…in fact…it was almost worse."

Fluttershy had a worried look on her face

"After the incident…the bullies stopped…but…instead…everypony was scared of me. Whenever I walked into a room…everybody would start whispering to each other…and I've heard some of them. They say things like, 'That pony's a psycho,' and 'He should get checked into an insane asylum.' I was still an outcast…but for completely different reasons…I was no longer the geek who studied magic and music…I was a deranged psychopath…" Copper was trying his best not to let a single tear fall, "I…I never wanted to hurt anypony with my magic…I swear…I just…I just…I was sick of it…I…I…wanted it to stop. A pony isn't a psycho just because of one outburst right?!" Copper pleaded, raising his voice a little at the end…and he finally shed a tear. "And it didn't stop there…word got out to Canterlot…and then…even some of the ponies around town were scared of me…backing away from me when I got close. I-I can still remember some of their frightened faces…looking at me like…I was some kind of…monster. Maybe…maybe that's all I am…I'm just a monster…"

Copper's heart filled with pain, and tears escaped his eyes, remembering all of their scared expressions. Fluttershy couldn't believe what she was hearing. She had no idea that this pony had been through this much. Now she understood why he was so shy…so insecure…and so paranoid. She could see how emotionally scarred he really was. One little mistake, and he was exiled by everypony. Neglected to the point of losing his own self-worth. To the point of mentally torturing himself…and being all alone. Nopony to reach out to. Nopony to help him. Fluttershy couldn't even imagine going through something like that. Nopony should ever have to go through anything like that.

"So…that's basically it…I'm a unicorn who was bullied…used his magic for the wrong reasons…nearly killed said bullies…and has been exiled as a psycho by his school and most of Canterlot ever since…" Copper looked at Fluttershy with tear-stained eyes, and then looked away once more in shame, "If you want to leave…I understand. I am a monster…"

Copper looked down with his eyes closed, tears escaping his eyes. He waited for a minute, expecting to hear the flapping of Fluttershy's wings as she flew away…but instead he felt a hoof on his again…he looked up to see Fluttershy staring back at him with those amazing teal eyes. Her eyes didn't seem filled with fear, but with something else. Sympathy.

"Y-You're still here?" Copper said in disbelief.

"Of course," Fluttershy said with a heart-warming smile.

"W-Why?" Copper asked, completely shocked, "I'm a terrible pony. A psychopath. A monster…"

"Coppermane, do you regret what you did?" Fluttershy asked him.

"It haunts me every day." Copper said, with obvious pain in his voice.

"Coppermane, you are not a terrible pony. A terrible pony wouldn’t regret his mistakes. You know what you are? You're misunderstood. You never meant to harm any pony, you just lashed out after years of being pushed around. You wanted the benefit of the doubt. You wanted to be accepted. Right?”

Fluttershy was correct…about everything. He was misunderstood. He craved the benefit of the doubt…he just wanted to be accepted for who he is now, instead of being neglected for his transgressions. And she wasn't done.

"And if you really were a terrible pony, you wouldn't be Princess Celestia's student would you?"

She had a point.

"What you went through was terrible, Coppermane. Nopony should ever have to go through that."

Copper finally looked up at Fluttershy, her hoof still on his.

"So…y-you're not scared, or disappointed?" Copper asked.

Fluttershy shook her head and gave Copper a warm smile, "You're a good pony, Coppermane, and you certainly aren't a monster, or a psychopath."

Copper couldn't believe it. After all of that…after revealing his deepest darkest secrets…after seeing him cry…Fluttershy was still here…just like she promised.

"You've been holding that in for a long time, haven't you?" Fluttershy asked.

"Yeah…yeah I have,” Coppermane said. “Um…Fluttershy?"

"Yes?" Fluttershy said, still smiling.

Copper put his other hoof on top of hers, "Thank you…thank you so much…"

Not exactly 100% sure why I like this moment so much. I guess that it has something to do with the fact thatshe actually stayed and listened, and was even sympathetic to Coppermane. Still not 100% sure why.

And the pairing is amazing. I literally couldn't tolerate any other Fluttershy ships after I read your stories.
Well, I didn't really like any other Flutterships, at least. They just seemed so wrong after I read your stories. That's how perfect of a pair that Fluttershy and Coppermane are.

My favorite moment was right after he got beat up on his first day at CHS, and Fluttershy first met him. I just loved that scene.

My favorite moment has to be when they finally confess their love for each other on top of the mountain and share their first kiss.

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