Loveliest of Trees... from Fluttershy’s PoV?

I’ve been writing a story from the female’s PoV, and it’s really interesting and fun. It presents a challenge with first person, which is losing the omnipotence you have as the author, and also not projecting omnipotence into the character themselves. It’s challenging but fun.

I’ve been thinking... what if I overhauled Loveliest of Trees to be from Fluttershy’s PoV as she interacts with Coppermane. And we can learn about him through her eyes. More showing instead of telling.

What do you all think? I’m seriously considering trying this out since the current redux of Loveliest is barely started.

Comments

[doggogo1]

Or hear me out you can do both of them. Go with the original idea and keep it going. So if you take a break or hit a writer's block you can put it as an interlude to each I don't know 4 chapters. That way you have time to think and have your muse spark back to life when you're ready to write again. Food for thought.

[Laani]

Awesome

[FourShadow]

I say go ahead. It's a good idea. ^^

[lyrabetes3939]

If the current redux isn't working for you, then sure, try something new!

[TriforceAndroid]

Do it! I like that idea!