Changes and fixes

I've switched a few continuity errors in Spitfired Into Motherhood and i would like to know your opinion on something.

In Living Nightmare, would you like me to add a chapter where it shows Stellar's torment under Alchemist's hooves, inwhich it will also have Nightmare coming to terms with how Alchemist (as she thinks Blueblood)'s cruelty and how horrid it is and her coming to care somewhat for Stellar?

Let me know in the comments

Comments

[Daxn]

. In Living Nightmare, would you like me to add a chapter where it shows Stellar's torment under Alchemist's hooves, inwhich it will also have Nightmare coming to terms with how Alchemist (as she thinks Blueblood)'s cruelty and how horrid it is and her coming to care somewhat for Stellar?

Most definitely, my dear Sir.

[harts fire]

Living Nightmare, would you like me to add a chapter.
this sounds like a good idea to me.

[Admiral Q Ponyform]

I want you to restore Living Nightmare to it's previous version. This rewrite sucks and hurts it.

[Nova Blaze]

Wasn't that how it was in the original? Personally, I really liked the Naruto and Kuruma vibe it had.

[Chrome Masquerade]

3818754 Same! i really enjoyed the first version.