Final Opinions Before I Color? Pt2

I took a lot of your suggestions to heart and tried them out. How does she look now?

Comments

[brodash]

i like it for a suggestion maby put a few tears on the human

[Schroedingers_Katze]

Aww, this looks precious. Precious purple pony cuddles for Cloe.

I go with brodash´s suggestion, maybe have a lone tear run down our lone humans cheek?

[musicman722]

not enough sex. lol

[Lusewing]

While the size of the boobs are fully belivable for a well developed woman they are WAY to round and look fake. Real boobs sag, particually that size. Also unless the fabric is made to fit around each breast it would be hard for the top to produce folds like that. This is a really useful guide (and will save having rather odd searches on the internet) Breast guide

With that all said the image looks great. I would have her top riding up her waist a little as it would add some textured folds that would give that midsection some character instead of remining blank. just have it falling forward off her hip a little.

[Immortan Joe]

3523164 i.imgur.com/g3YWCHx.jpg

This is a more developed version. The boobs are still cartoon-ish but it's much more cleaner. Any thoughts?

[Lusewing]

3523192 Much better, though i would still taper off the fold line that leads up into her armpit, that way her top looks more natural rather than housing a tube to hold her boobs.

[Fonypan]

OC, or humanized pone?

[Immortan Joe]

3523428 It's Chloe from "The Last of My Kind"

[Fonypan]

3523461 Also, you can find boob tutorials on DA.

Any way, boobs hang from the shoulders.
This is the best I can do without posting nsfw.

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[Nephilinae]

3523192 chole's back looks broken, try having the small of her back not so pronounced.

[Immortan Joe]

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i.imgur.com/4SZfacJ.jpg

How's this?

[Nephilinae]

3523619 can you make the curve of her back kinder? like a 7 compared to ) , make it more )

if that makes sense...

[Seraphimus]

Her fingers look weird especially on the right hand... hands are hard But I think they are just a bit too small/short, And I feel like The lower part of twilights right leg (The part paralell-ish to the ground) Is Just a little a bit too long. though that may also be a perspective thing, If not sorter maybe change the angle of that leg so it looks less like it's sticking almost straight out to the side.

Also nice job On the thumb placement on the Right hand. Behind the leg so you dont have to draw it. because it's always the stupid thumb that screws up the hand,