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shirotora


I'm just a simple, southern man that loves ponies, Star Wars, ridiculousness, and adorable things. I'm also an ex-Navy nuclear machinists mate, and life long martial artist.

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Sep
15th
2014

Destiny and A Question About the ItB Bonus Chapters · 8:48pm Sep 15th, 2014

So, I've been on a major Destiny binge. Anyone have it on PS3? I'm looking for people for raid teams.

Also, does anyone have an idea for a 'what if' chapter for Into the Black? If so, write it out and I'll post it. This can be an opportunity to get recognition and readers of your own. Obviously, I'll give credit and a link to your user page.

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Sorry, PS4 here. If they're compatible, my PSN tag's the same as my fimfiction name.

it is interresting to see a what if chapter with either luna or cadence to see how they would react

2457626 I created a clan if you're interested. It's called "Brown Eye Pirates". Feel free to join.

for some reason all i can see is spike being sent to earth and dying less and 2 minutes in and then years later being brought back by a Ghost..that actually seems interesting but i do not know how to write at all.

Unfortunately I only have it for ps4... miss my ps3 though, it died due to a yellow light of death and I've been missing out on all the good exclusives for it.

2457626 yep they are, you can't play together.

2457643 I got it for PS3 Id is observerofworlds

2458140 You should join my clan, "Brown eye pirates", and plunder some booty :trollestia:. Yes, it's a real clan. You can apply at bungie.net

Jack plays Chutes and Ladders with Discord.

2458309 I play with your mom









She's always the shoe :trollestia:

2458320
You're just jealous that Jack would win.

2458327 That's only because Discord insists it was the lead pipe.

2457643
I'll try to remember that for tomorrow. Done on my PS4 for the evening, and don't really feel like going across the house to do one little thing again.

2458396 You can do it from bungie.net. Just log in, go to the group section and do a search

Well damn...I'm on Xbone...

And I have absurd amounts of time this week due to having my last wisdom tooth out yesterday at dental.

2458533
A request to join has been sent.

Also, does anyone have an idea for a 'what if' chapter for Into the Black?

What if… shirotora would knock this shit the fuck off with these pointless wastes of bandwidth?

Afterwords, alternate endings, appendices, bonus chapters, epilogues, glossaries, indexes, out‐takes: these all either let us see how or why a story was written, ease referencing or simply reading it, or actually add something to the story. Your what if…? “chapters” do none of these, merely shit up my feed and increment my unread favourites counter.

2459349 First of, either be respectful or don't comment at all. I don't mind people criticizing my work, but saying it like you did is just childish. This is your only warning, be respectful or be blocked.

Second, a lot of people like the 'what if' chapters, so I do them. It's not all about you. If you don't like them, don't read them.

2459436 But he/she has a point. People probably would rather read a sequel to "Into the Black" then another what-if chapter.

(Which were really rather disappointing: "Yea, new update!" -> "Oh... just a what-if scenario...":facehoof:)

Wish I could play with you on Destiny, but I'm on Xbox unfortunately (Already hit the soft-cap of 20, trying to get more rare, legendary and exotic stuff to fight in the Vault of Glass and rank up)

Maybe your what-if could be if Twilight ended up in Old Russia instead? The Vex would've something new to fight besides the Guardians, the Fallen and the Cabal.

2461466 Perhaps, but it doesn't excuse his/her childish behavior. I post those so people have something to read until the sequels are ready to be posted and to let them know I haven't forgotten this story. I have been planing to do a bonus chapter that takes place either during Twilight's recovery on Earth, or during the year between the defeat of the Dratali and the completion of Harmony station. That or I might post a chapter about one of the other conflicts Twilight mentioned that she skipped over for being "not important".

2461844 Why not create a separate story for them then? I feel the same way as xoid- the "what if"s don't add to the story, they really don't belong in the original story, why are they there? If people like em, no reason not to put them in a "ItB What Ifs" story, make them their own story, etc- but constantly updating the original story, A SEPERATE CONTINUITY ALTOGETHER, with them is just getting annoying as hell at this point. Do they belong in the universe? Sure, you can say that. Do they belong to the original story which explored a different idea altogether? Not a chance in hell they do! The story wasn't meant for those ideas, so why do you keep cramming them down the throats of people who just wanted ItB rather then giving people the option?

Seriously, I loved the original story, but seeing these "what ifs" pop up in it is just plain pissing me off at this point.

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