Chapters 1 and 2 edited

For those who would be interested, Chapters 1 and 2 of Those Who Came Before have been edited for grammar and formatting.

Please let me know what you think.

Also, I am starting work on Chapter 3. The ball is rolling people, and you WILL have more pony words to read...

Comments

[MrSpartan]

Well, I for one am happy to hear it.

[Biker_Dash]

1933728 Excellent. I do hope that you will be pleased with the further chapters to come.

[MrSpartan]

1933865 I'm sure others would be or are happy about this too. It's just that this story hasn't updated in so long most have probably thought it dead, or it's under their radar of attention.

[Biker_Dash]

1933878 That is why I am trying to get the word out to those who have faved this fic.

[Biker_Dash]

1934358 Yeah... And I am nearly 1600 words into ch 3 now... and I just got home early from my 9-Ball match, so i have the rest of the night, and all day tomorrow to crank out pon3-words

(look at all this time to fingerbang my keyboard!)

[star1wars3]

Might need to reread the first two chapters before the new one whenever you post it, good thing spring break starts after this week.

[SierraActual]

Not gonna lie, I wasn't expecting a status update on this for at least another month. I'm glad that you are already making good progress in getting the next chapter posted, and I can't wait to see what you do with the story.

[Biker_Dash]

1935184 1935238 I am about 2200 words into Chapter 3 right now, so hopefully, the next chapter will be up before the end of the week. As to what I do with this story, well, I shall try to do a LOT of exploring of ideas, and make this fic worthy of being among some of the site's best stories, such as Blue Angel, The Piano Man, and The Secret Life of Rarity, to name a few.

I even have a sequel in the planning for this.

[Homunclus]

Cool

[star1wars3]

1935351 Well damn, this should be fun and with spring break here I have some time to reread.