Rated’s Fanfiction Adoption Agency Returns · 7:55pm May 9th, 2013
Greetings my fellow bronies of the world. Well it happened again, I got a bunch of ideas in my mind that I don’t know what to do with and while I have no time in writing these stories, I’m sure a few of you might have time or know somebody who does have time to write these. You’re free to take these ideas and take them in whatever direction you want to go.
If you want to see the first list of adopted stories I came up with, check out here: link
So let’s get started.
1. Title: Honesty and Dishonesty (Adopted by InsanityCorps )
Idea Summary: This starts off with the notion that Changelings have made peace with Ponies and have decided to move into their lands for a fresh start. While there are mixed reactions about such an idea, a certain farmer of ours isn’t took keen on the idea of Changeling joining ponies, not trusting their deceitful ways and ability to change their looks and impersonating ponies. However, to AJ's shock, her brother hires a Changeling to work on the farm because he was the best qualified out of those that applied and now has to work with him.
-Before anybody asks, this doesn’t have to be a romance if the writer doesn’t want to. The idea follows a bit on racism, but more about accepting people for who they are despite following ways you don’t believe in. Changelings like to be deceptive and find clever ways to solve their problems instead of honest, head on ways. And while some people may find that nature to be wrong, others might see it as not a bad quality. Applejack would naturally be distrustful of the Changeling, believing him to be scheming something and trying to find easy ways out. However, it turns out they all have good intentions behind them and actually benefit not only the farm, but others as well.
-We like to think Applejack as somepony who follows specific values, and holds them up high, believing them to be the honest good way. When somepony who challenges those believes comes along, but uses them for good purposes, it will obviously cause some confusion. Of course, eventually, Applejack accepts the Changeling’s way and sees him as a friend (Something more if the writer wants).
2. The Buzzer
Idea Summary: It’s bad enough for Scootaloo that she can’t fly that well, but add to the fact that an accident (Cause by whatever reason the writer decides) has caused her to become blind makes her feel like the unluckiest pony in the world. However, Scootaloo soon discovers two things about herself, that she has amazing acrobatic abilities (Giving her a Cutie Mark) and that her blindness has given her a “Radar Sense” with super hearing. This inspires her to become the super hero “The Buzzer” using her buzzing wings to emit sound to know where criminals are while fighting for the little ponies.
-Pretty much a Daredevil origin like story for Scootaloo that evolves into its own thing. The writer can make this more uplifting or as darkening as the actual Daredevil comics go as well as give their own version of the Kingpin. It might be better that a story like this takes place in a city like Manehatten or Canterlot (Excuse being that she moves with her parents or it takes place when she’s older and decides to just move on her own), but if the writer can make Ponyville work too then why not. And yeah it’s a cheesy super hero name, but come on.
3. The Paladin (Adopted by VampDash)
Idea Summary: Most ponies think Prince Blueblood is an arrogant, narcissistic, corrupt royal pony. But that is only what he appears as in public. In truth he is furious on how the nobility use criminal acts to ruin the lives of those lesser then them. That’s why, every night, he dons a white set of armor and cloak to defend those who can't defend themselves. With magic and steel, he is the costumed night fighter, the Paladin. Corruption dies by his blade and none of his “noble friends” will know the difference.
-Taking inspiration from Batman, Zorro, Green Arrow, and Green Hornet, Blueblood acts like a corrupt royal noble with his fellow rich ponies, but is really using them to stop their criminal acts to defend the innocent. This story should tackle a lot on the social class issues and what duties both have to each other in society. Blueblood also feels torn for his actions. He knows what most think of him because of his “act” and he wants to behave normally. However, he needs to keep this charade up in order to have the information needed to defeat the nobles and their game of crime if he has any chance of making it easier for the common pony.
-How Blueblood came to be like this is up to the writer. He could have always been like this or he could have been just like the nobles until some commoner did something that changed his mind. Whatever the reason it would give Blueblood a chance to do something badass. (Not that I like the guy personally, It’s just he’s the best qualified pony to do this story)
4. Fluttershy’s Woodland Critter Christmas
Idea Summary: I don’t have to explain this one. It should be obvious what this is.
5. Background Killers (Adopted by Diokno44)
Idea Summary: Vinyl Scratch and Octavia are roommates, best friends, and popular musicians in their respective fields. However, something that the public doesn't know is that they are also the top co-assassins for their hitmare agency. However, both ponies receive new secret orders, kill their partner. Instead of doing this, they fake their deaths and start their own assassin agency, hiring various background ponies you never would have suspected of being professional killers. Not only do they have to work as a team, but must discover why the agency wanted them both dead in the first place.
-Pretty much a Mr. and Mrs. Smith deal, except I think it should be more humorous and an a longer plot. There also is a bit more of a story to this. Instead of trying to kill each other and then go after their former bosses, they just fake their deaths and decided to start their own assassin squad, hiring background ponies you never would have suspected of being assassins to join them in not only being the best hired killers in the world, but stopping both their former organization from something sinister.
6. The Royal Changeling Wedding (Adopted by BringBackSonicSatAM)
Idea Summary: Nearly a year ago, Twilight Sparkle’s brother went MIA and later assumed dead after saving his squad from a sand worm attack in the badlands. A year later, Twilight finds out that not only is her brother alive, but he was rescued by a race called Changelings who have come in peace for a better future. Even more shocking, Shining Armor has fallen in love with Queen Chrysalis and they plan to marry to seal the alliance. But her former foalsitter, Cadance, believes that the Changelings are planning something sinister. Is Cadance right, or is this just jealously manifesting itself?
-A major AU situation, what if Shining Armor was saved by the Changelings and fell in love with Chrysalis, giving them enough food to survive from the wastelands? If Twilight reacting to the original marriage was insane enough, how would see feel about her brother marrying a giant shape shifting bug queen? Not to mention what does Cadance, who is love with Shining and jealous as all hell? Does Twilight give her brother the happiness he wants or does she decided to follow a jealous Cadance who will do anything to have Shining as hers.
That’s all for now. Maybe I’ll have more another time.
Laters.
I demand 4 and 5 be done within a month!
1065745
You'll have to get somebody else to do it. It's called adoption for a reason.
1065750 Thanks a lot, Brogre! Now I'm sad! What are you going to do now, huh!?
1065745 Why don't you do them? Or even better save idea #4 for December.
The paladin reminds me of, well, Batman
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I'm going to do my happy dance!
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So many good ideas here... So little time... Seriously I would read all of these.
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Only he's the "White Knight" instead of the "Dark Knight"
1065780 I don't write. I make semi-witty comments and try to make people laugh with pics, GIFs, and blogs.
1065786 So you're enjoying my despair!?
1065793 Well I couldn't adopt either one having not seen either "Woodland Critters Christmas" or "Mr. and Mrs. Smith".
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Dude, I wrote a story where a filly gets run over by a carriage. A Mare mercy kills the only one she ever loved and is hated by half her town. An older sister who blames herself for the death of her younger brother. An orphan who was nearly maimed to death after being betrayed by a friend. A filly who watches her grandma die. A student who ran away at a filly's age because she though her mentor betrayed her and still refuses to go back even after she lost everything. A story where a filly loses the only memory she has of her dead father. I'm currently writing a story where one princess's daughter figure is assassinated and another one where a civilization that has lost it's queen and is on the road to extinction.
I don't enjoy despair. I thrive on it.
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Well the Background Killers idea was just "inspired" you really don't need to see the movie to write that one. And any South Park episode can be seen on their site
1065814 Well all the same I've got a lot of ideas lined up at the moment.
Hmm... 1 and 5 intrigue me. Too bad I'm so busy with my own stuff. Wish there were more hours in the day.
The last story is kind of like Adventures of a Teenage Foalsitter without the heavy clop.
Must write idea number five but so busy with other ideas.....CURSE YOU WRITERS BLOCK AND IDEAS!!!!!!
Seriously though, I love the idea, if I ever have the time I may just write it though don't honestly count on it
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1066360
Yeah, I'm a horrible person.
Rated Ponystar: Killing and ruining character's live 99.9 percent of the time
1066387 Where did you get that username, anyway?
1066408
I'm a wrestling fan. So I took a name similar to one of my favorite wrestlers, Edge the Rated-R Superstar
1066423 Sounds like a company that rates pony fics like one would a game or movie.
I'd take one, but I have about 6 or 7 of my own waiting for me to finish finals and my current fic. I'm thinking of finding someone to adopt one or two of them out to myself at this point.
When I started reading the summary of 5, I instantly thought of Dexter. Octavia and Vinyl live together, but Vinyl thinks something is up with her roommate. As Vinyl investigates, the two begin an intricate game of cat and mouse, never letting on their own identity. Kind of alike, in a lot of ways. I could actually see Octavia killing someone, but for some reason I can't see the DJ doing it. I like to believe she puts on a very tough exterior but would never do something "bad". Another nice list!
Background killers, please.