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Knight Breeze


Just your average gaming geek/college student. I study computer science, play pathfinder, and write stories, and have a patreon!

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  • 49 weeks
    Xlibris

    Hey, you guys ever hear of Xlibris? I've got an offer from them to publish my book, but I'm getting some shady vibes from some of the reviews I've read about them. Any thoughts?

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  • 50 weeks
    Amazon's changing it's print costs.

    So, as of June 20th, Amazon will be changing its print costs. Specifically, everything is going to be a bit more expensive. If you were on the fence for buying a physical copy of my books, now's the time to change your mind, seeing as how the price is going to increase in a couple of months. Thought I'd give you all the heads up.

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  • 51 weeks
    What I Am: Aftermath chapter.

    Hey, guys, I'm writing a conclusion chapter for What I Am. Nothing too substantial, given that a sequel and spin off already exist, but I thought I'd put it down as both a way to let those that don't exactly follow me (or, at the very least, don't follow my blog) know that the second book is out, and also know that A Darkened Sky is about to get a whole lot of chapters.

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  • 52 weeks
    Fool's Gambit.

    Man, did you ever go back and just... cringe at what you did before? That happened to me with Fool's Gambit. The story has plenty of potential, that's not the problem. My problem is with how it's written. The prose is off, there are numerous errors, and I feel like the whole thing is rushed. Like, that first part could have easily been 4-5 chapters longer, and it would have been better for

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  • 52 weeks
    Live on Google Play!

    Hey, guys, just wanted you to know that What I've Become and Nightmare of the Past is now live on Google Play! So, if you didn't have a kindle-compatible device before, you can buy both books for 3.99 each right now on Google Play! I'll be working to get them into more outlets during the next couple of days, so keep an eye out for them!

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Apr
11th
2023

Bam. · 5:53am Apr 11th, 2023


https://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B0C235Q888?ref_=dbs_m_mng_rwt_calw_tkin_1&storeType=ebooks&qid=1681176034&sr=1-1
Book's out.
Book is out.

Edit: Paperback is now live. It's a beast, though, so it costs a bit more, at 16.99, but hey, it's well over double the first book's length, so it'll keep you happy for a while! E-Book is still only $3.99 though. Feel free to go buy it, and tell me how horrible it was in a review. Please and thank you!

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Comments ( 37 )

Congrats. :rainbowkiss:

Do you ever plan on going to any pony cons in the future? I would love to buy the 2 books there from you since I love collecting physical books.

All this from a MLP FanFic. You must be proud. (I know I would be)

5722408 Maybe some day, but not now. I've got two kids, and another on the way. If the books really take off, I might be able to do just that some day, but not until after the money situation is well and truly handled.

5722409 You bet I am! I just wish I had a better head for advertising. It always feels like boasting, and I've always been taught since a very early age to not be boastful.

Glad to see the link and know the hard copies will be available soon. I know how you feel regarding the money issue. Cost of living going up and income going down faster then Russia's popularity.

5722410
Ah rats (congrats by the way!) I understand. :facehoof:

5722414 Not lucky, this is all self-published. I don't have a publisher. Just good, old-fashioned hard work.

5722421
Still.

At least people care about yours...

5722422 My apologies. I hope you do well soon!

5722408 Physical's ready, now!

I spotted the mistake with the cover art: No ponies.

5722492 alas, having ponies would run me afoul of Hasbro, and I don't have nearly as many lawyers at my disposal to deal with them.

Ordered my copy! :twilightsmile:

5722545 Yay! Don't forget to leave a review telling the world how terrible I am!

Hell yeah! Gonna grab a copy when I get back to my computer.

5722496
Hasbro also owns all the names, so you are fucked anyway if they notice.

5722636 which is why the published version of my story that I'm advertising in this blog post has had all hasbro related things scrubbed from it before I put it on sale on amazon.

Is this another book in the series or the non pony version of what I’ve done.

5722732 Non-pony version. I'll be updating my stories on this site now that this is done, since this has been my big, number 1# project for the past five years.

5722668
ah, a stealth release 😛
best of luck! 🍀

Ordered mine, and looking forward to it!


5722767
This isn't just the same story with minimal tweaks to make it technically not MLP. The first one was almost completely re-written. And it wasn't a lazy re-write either. The setting only seems a little bit similar if you kind of squint, only a few characters have equivalents to ponies in the original story, even those few have largely different roles to play, and it ends up in a significantly different place. Even parts that needed no change at all for copyright reasons were changed and added on, like most of the parts with Captain Hazalk.

So if this one is anything like the first it is definitely worth getting as its own thing and not just for its connection to the fanfiction version.

5723056 Thanks, man, that means a lot to me to hear that. I really put a lot of effort into it, and I'm glad you noticed!

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I definitely did notice, and I think you deserve lots of praise for it.

"Hard" cover just arrived, and double sized is right, you could stack 2 of the first and it still not be as stacked. This is gonna be a good weekend read. RIP my sleep til I'm done. Thanks again for sticking to it, and not dying in burnout/obscurity/MIA like many other authors. Look forward to both the 3rd book and the future fanfics.

5723089 Thanks for sticking with me! Like I said before, my interest has not waned, merely the time I'm able to apply to any one project.

So, I decided to stick with the big project first, and get that one out of the way. Which means I'll be able to get to the fanfics now!

Awesome! I will order mine now :twilightsmile:

I got my copy, and was about to start reading when I remembered you did revisions on the first one and I forgot to get a new one of that. How important are those revisions to know before I read the new one? I'm getting a new copy of the first either way, I just want to know if I should wait on starting my read.

5723661 there's a few important things, such as a better ending, and the intro to the changeling, but it's mostly spelling and grammar edits.

However, you can force your kindle version to update to the latest by going into your kindle settings and navigating to where the content is.

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Thanks! I only have the physical version, which unfortunately lacks the ability to update.

5723696 It used to be where creators could give out free e-books with physical purchases, and that was how the first book was set up. That option is missing, now, so either they made it standard, or removed it entirely. Either way, check Amazon to make sure you don't have the e-book.

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Even if I do have it I lack any way to read an e-book currently. Besides I don't mind giving you some extra money. The work you have put into all of this is worth it.

So I’ve got my digital and physical copies now!

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And now I’ve read through both in three days. (Impatiently waiting for more.)

But I really enjoyed them. I love the differences, especially with King Tor and the other countries. (Being careful not to spoil interesting plot points.)

I think Lady Siv is great, too!

5727424 I'm glad you enjoyed them so much! Yeah, I was really trying to put together a lived-in world, with its own culture, history and people, and I hope that that shows through in the story!

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