Just a nerd living in a basement located somewhere in Equestria. Always looking for friends, but will (grudgingly) accept enemies as well. Feel free to shoot me a message; I only ask you don't aim for the face!
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Lower the Moon A fanfiction of the rise and fall of the Lunar Republic, from the view of a faithful apprentice. 7,266 words
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Suffer in Silence Every day, Princess Celestia wakes up in terrible pain, and every day, she chooses to endure it, until the one day she's left feeling blissfully normal. Few things have ever scared her so much. 4,605 words · 1,290 · 35
2242984 Yes, the ending of I Ain't Your Sacrifice is a hit or miss with the readers.
Well, if you ever have dinner again, you're free to listen to my other stories. Each and everyone of the stories I publish has an audio version to it (links in the long description of every story).
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I went ahead and added you on a second easier-to-edit document. You should see it pop up in your email!
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Dude, grammar is the number one thing I worry about most in my writing. I've been working on a writing focused degree for the past three years, but I've always thrown grammar out the window. Most of my schoolwork are straightforward research and report, so bulletin points=paragraph structure. Aaah, the joys of scientific writing.
The work in progress version of the story can be found here, if you're interested. Obviously, avoid the In-Progress and Idea Trash sections, since those aren't ready for review (unless you want future spoilers). The document isn't quite open edit, but it does have open comments, so just highlight and keyboard slam away. Otherwise, feel free to just dig through the posted chapters on FIMFiction and PM me all the stupid things I did wrong (like semicolon abuse). I'm up for idea critique, of course, within reasonable arguments (such as you said).
Anyways, thanks so much for your interest! And I'll check out yo works fo sho!
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My sister, future brother in law, and I actually listened to the audio version of your story over dinner. I'll be honest, looking for giggles, the cover art drew us in. While my sister was upset over the ending, I loved it.
And thanks for the wonderful tutorial! I'm sure I'll be farming them followers like dandelions sometime soon
It pleases me that you favored I Ain't Your Sacrifice.
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